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Mouthwatering

mouthwatering attraction
 
she's so hot by the sea
 
my want is her touch
 
touch me with her wetness
 
soak me with her feel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kingston Avatar
April 24, 2025 at 8:22 PM
JUMP RIGHT IN. :) You may just see a mermaid! Now I want to live by the ocean again! Either that or take a Calgon bath. Tee hee
Romios Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 1:47 PM
I disagree with Gershon, there is bo indication, she was a old fish!. Amazing, that you write as a young mam, i like that in you! Thanks again for another poem,I loved. Pangie
Messina Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 3:18 PM
Thank you so much, Pangie. It's getting boring growing old; I need to try to think young sometimes (lol) Thanks so much for stopping by...love & hugs, Charlie
Buhagiar Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 11:00 PM
Wow, send our temperature up.
Wolf Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 7:01 PM
Gee, all that heat generated by a cold fish. Remarkable! ~ Old Man in the Sea
Read Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 12:13 PM
Hi Charles, your poem is certainly mouthwatering, good luck in the contest.
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