Mouthwatering

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Sanford Style Tanka poetry Contest. Sponsored by Suzette Richards *(Picture Prompt)

mouthwatering attraction she's so hot by the sea my want is her touch touch me with her wetness soak me with her feel

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 4/24/2025 8:22:00 PM

JUMP RIGHT IN. :) You may just see a mermaid! Now I want to live by the ocean again! Either that or take a Calgon bath. Tee hee

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/15/2024 1:47:00 PM

I disagree with Gershon, there is bo indication, she was a old fish!. Amazing, that you write as a young mam, i like that in you! Thanks again for another poem,I loved. Pangie

Charles Messina
Date: 12/15/2024 3:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pangie. It's getting boring growing old; I need to try to think young sometimes (lol) Thanks so much for stopping by...love & hugs, Charlie

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/14/2024 11:00:00 PM

Wow, send our temperature up.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/14/2024 7:01:00 PM

Gee, all that heat generated by a cold fish. Remarkable! ~ Old Man in the Sea

John Read

Date: 12/14/2024 12:13:00 PM

Hi Charles, your poem is certainly mouthwatering, good luck in the contest.