Paula Swanson Poet Haiku

Mournful Cry

Mournful warning cry
travels across the cold sea....
quick, look out, watch close

From within the fog
beacon of life in the night....
guide to safe harbor


Paula Swanson

For the contest:
   In The Light Haiku
Sponsored by Russell Stivey
Placement:2nd

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 13, 2011 at 11:47 AM CONGRATS PAULA ON A SPLENDID SECOND PLACE WIN WITH THIS RARE BEAUTY LUV..

Barbara Gorelick September 12, 2011 at 6:28 PM congrats Paula, so well done. BG

Carolyn Devonshire September 12, 2011 at 4:17 PM Seeing that "beacon of life" on a foggy day or night saves lives, Paula. Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Russell's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 3:27 PM Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in Russell's "In the Light of Haiku"contest Paula. Love,Carol

Russell Sivey September 12, 2011 at 3:00 PM Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest "In the Light of Haiku"!!

Phyllis Babcock September 9, 2011 at 2:49 PM Nice Haiku and good luck in the contest. love phyl