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Mountaintop Lake Lost

Dear Lake, why lob here atop a mountain
    when the lowlands are so superior
    with more catchment area to fountain
    more rain to fill your vast interior.

Alpine aspirations for altitude
    are worthy ambitions for rocks and crags.
But not for frigid lake in solitude,
    except for the art show reflection brags.

The air is so clear and crisp on calm days
    that lake reflection is a masterpiece,
    perfectly mirrored portraits it portrays
    of rogue mountains smiling, posing, at peace.

Up high, here, nature's sounds are rarefied.
The air is so thin, cold and flatly grim
    that any birds flocking here to abide
    are stage-struck by silence, the lake's own hymn.

The weather has no foibles and hindrance.
The winds and rain love to shatter and spoil
    the reflection galley hung in silence,
    wrecking the scene and creating turmoil.

You could climb a tree for a treetop view,
    but, way up here, well above the snow line
    there are no trees, only meadows for shoe,
    so I dive in clear blue water, sublime.

Colorful fish defy the location.
To them, whither the lake is high or low
    matters little in this wet world nation
    all immune from rain, hail, wind, sleet and snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 12, 2017 at 7:39 PM
John, congratulations on your win ~*
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