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Mountaintop Lake

I have reached the peak, of Mountaintop Lake A mystical lake, where clear blue water awaits The bright colorful fish makes my soul wake The sounds of nature, beautifully resonates
A breath-taking sunset, leaves me lost in a gaze Mesmerized by, gifts of wonder from our maker The painted backdrop, I stand in amaze God our creator, such a peacemaker
Night falls, the fireflies begin to take flight The air thins, with a breeze so nice and cool Such a magical night, that's so full of delight The big bright moon, reflecting off the mirrored pool
With there treetop view, birds sing each other to sleep These memories, I've made will never fade Captured moments, forever mine to keep As my journey moves on, I head into the glade
5/9/2017

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Date: 6/12/2017 7:45:00 PM
Jeremy , congratulations on your win ~*
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/12/2017 7:50:00 PM
Thanks a lot Eve :) Take care and God bless!!
Date: 5/10/2017 1:03:00 PM
Beautiful write Jeremy..GL in the contest
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/12/2017 7:52:00 PM
Sorry, for the late response Joseph. But thank you :)
Date: 5/9/2017 5:27:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Jeremy! I love it :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/9/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I really appreciate that!!!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/9/2017 5:29:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I really appreciate that!!!

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