Mountains of My Country Premiere Contest Winner

Just drop once, when you happen to go by.

A tale they may count, mountains of my country;
Of paradise invaded and forests destroyed,
Of vessels adrift and sailors athirst,
Of savage hunting and extinction of the Dodo.

Witness to history stand mountains of my country;
Bloodshed, war times, hunger and poverty;
Settlers, slaves, coolies or expatriates,
They know all, who defiled in time.

Inert and helpless lay mountains of my country. 
Waves of changes struck their homeland.
Forest cried but sweat fell with hope in heart
For making habitation in a newfound land.

Store of knowledge are mountains of my country.
They may tell you of slavery abolished,
Of unification of heart and mind and
The fight for freedom for a respectful life.

Beware, omniscient are mountains of my country
They may tell you of clean or dirty business.
Of unity in diversity or the fumes of hatred
Which burn dark hearts in the sanctity of homes.

Sages are to me, the mountains of my country.
From childhood to youth to parenthood;
Refuge they gave my helpless heart,
Blessed me when crossing overseas,
And were always here to welcome me back.

I love and respect the mountains of my country!

11/07/16
Contest: Mountains
Winner: 1st place.

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Date: 10/13/2017 12:09:00 PM
I remember of the great Himalayas by reading this poem. Congrats for your win.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/27/2017 11:28:00 AM
Oh Himalayas's just world wonder! I adore it with all the myth attached to it. Thanks for the read. GL :) Sunita
Date: 7/26/2017 5:45:00 PM
No two mountians are the same - but just in case we gave them names - mountains are the watchers - the keeper of secrets - same as trees - one can return after many years to a place that has changed in so many ways - but once passed the new buildings and all the trees that have grown - seeing your mountain you really know you're home - beautifully wrote - Indiana x x x
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/26/2017 11:56:00 PM
So true every immovable thing lies witness to lives lived around and if they had mouth they could relate history in the true version and one angle. Alas...but at least we human are given insight to respect them. In my religion, we worship a tree before cutting it if necessary and in so many other religion I've seen something common...Thanks :)
Date: 2/16/2017 5:45:00 PM
Although I read a lot of your poems just now, Sunita, this one caught my eye due to your ability to virtually bring the mountains of your country to life. Nice win. Congratulations!! :) Bartholomew
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/17/2017 9:49:00 AM
Thanks friend for your great words and the read. God bless you. :))
Date: 9/23/2016 8:12:00 PM
wow, here is an amazing one I had not seen of yours. I see it got a trophy. AWesome win and big congrats to you. I bet those are lovely mountains. Utah has them too.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/23/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. Its so kind of you. Good luck in your endeavors! :)
Date: 9/19/2016 7:50:00 AM
SUPD, Mountains and mile hills have been made by God, All powerful one who I love and laud. Jim Horn
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/19/2016 12:43:00 PM
Glad you could link with this poem and I appreciate your kind visit. :) Regards Sunita
Date: 9/17/2016 9:30:00 AM
Hi Sunita, how profoundly patriotic your poem. I fall in love with you and your mountains. Thanks for finding me first and the kind comments you made. Now I must read your others
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/17/2016 11:58:00 AM
This is such a heartfelt appreciation. I'm so glad you could link so closely with this poem and feel my adoration for mountains in my country. They gives the sign of being home. Thanks for the kind visit. Regards Sunita
Date: 9/13/2016 11:37:00 AM
Great poem. It's a true history and I cherish it. Congrats, my friend.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/13/2016 12:45:00 PM
Thanks! :)
Date: 8/29/2016 9:09:00 AM
A true evaluation of thins mentioned in the poem and it draws much emotion towards mother nature. Good. Continue.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/29/2016 9:36:00 AM
Agree with you...at time nature really conveys warm feelings and story unwinds in the mind.Thanks for stopping by and the encouraging comment. :) Sunita
Date: 7/29/2016 2:26:00 AM
Mountains are friends. Congratulations. Nature teaches us so much, when we take time to watch and listen. Your poem is a very good start for the day.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/29/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thanks for going through and I'm happy you enjoy it, reading about nature is always refreshing. Reg Sunita :)
Date: 7/27/2016 4:17:00 PM
Mountain's always tell's the true stories , rich and beautifuly captured you Sunita. I am entertained .. Lionel ..South Africa
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/27/2016 11:06:00 PM
Thank you for going through and the nice comment you left. True mountains are just mysteries...:) Sunita
Date: 7/22/2016 11:08:00 PM
Thanks Wendy for going through and the nice words. Regards Sunita :)
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Date: 7/22/2016 3:18:00 PM
Congtats on your great poem win x
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Date: 7/21/2016 6:47:00 PM
Big congrats for your trophy win, Sunita. It's awesome to live by mountains. I do too!! your love for them is obvious here.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/22/2016 8:17:00 AM
Hmmm, mountains, you just feel protected not only geographically, but there something weird about their silence. :) Thanks Sunita.
Date: 7/21/2016 2:04:00 PM
Sunita, congrats for your topmost podium! Highly deserving is your poem on Mountains, a silent observer! Balveen
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/22/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thanks for going through. I really appreciate your warm words :) Sunita
Date: 7/20/2016 1:32:00 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/21/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thanks so much for these kind words. Went through your writings. Enjoyed it as much. Keep on going. All the best. Are you a published poet? Sunita
Date: 7/19/2016 10:58:00 AM
Well done, Sunita...Skat
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/20/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thanks Skat, glad you enjoyed it. Love Sunita :)
Date: 7/18/2016 9:34:00 PM
Sunita, you have beautifully brought out the mountains as silent witnesses to the unfolding history and times of your country. Excellent take on the mountains theme. Aye mere pyare watan .... very evocative. Congratulations on a very well deserved firstplace in the contest! ~karam~
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/20/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thanks Misra ji, mere choti si pyare watan, though India is the first left behind by ancestors...Regards Sunita :)
Date: 7/18/2016 3:14:00 PM
Sunita, you can feel the dedication and love you have for your country...Congratulations on being number one.....
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/20/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Janis, ya true I love the feature and attractive spot of my country. Thanks for going through it. Regards Sunita
Date: 7/18/2016 2:10:00 PM
Sunita, what a wonderful poem a well with great and loving emotion deserving 1st place , I have favorite it.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/20/2016 9:59:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I'm honoured! :D thanks you appreciate it. Love Sunita
Date: 7/18/2016 10:02:00 AM
Wow! can't believe it, thanks Julia Ward for sponsoring this interesting contest! :D
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Julia Ward
Date: 7/18/2016 11:34:00 AM
There wasn't a jury... I was the judge of it, dear.
Date: 7/18/2016 8:32:00 AM
Lovely tribute to the strong mountains Sunita!many congratulations!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/18/2016 10:12:00 AM
Ya, its metaphoric but I feel they could become alive in some other dimension...:) Thanks.
Date: 7/18/2016 8:26:00 AM
Through your powerful 'mountains', so beautifully you tell about the love of your country which reflects so much happiness and sadness, Sunita. Amazing poem and congratulations on your Trophy First Place win in the Premiere Contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/18/2016 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, I'm touched by your lovely words and very...happy that this poem has been appreciated. Hugs Sunita :)
Date: 7/18/2016 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sunita...
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/18/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot, that so nice of you. :)
Date: 7/18/2016 4:20:00 AM
Congrats well done great poem x
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/18/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thanks so kind to go through it. :)
Date: 7/18/2016 1:38:00 AM
Strong and powerful write, from the heart. A worthy winner, well done Sunita. Viv
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/18/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thanks so much for these nice words. :)
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