Premiere Contest WinnerMountains of My Country

Just drop once, when you happen to go by.

A tale they may count, mountains of my country;
Of paradise invaded and forests destroyed,
Of vessels adrift and sailors athirst,
Of savage hunting and extinction of the Dodo.

Witness to history stand mountains of my country;
Bloodshed, war times, hunger and poverty;
Settlers, slaves, coolies or expatriates,
They know all, who defiled in time.

Inert and helpless lay mountains of my country. 
Waves of changes struck their homeland.
Forest cried but sweat fell with hope in heart
For making habitation in a newfound land.

Store of knowledge are mountains of my country.
They may tell you of slavery abolished,
Of unification of heart and mind and
The fight for freedom for a respectful life.

Beware, omniscient are mountains of my country
They may tell you of clean or dirty business.
Of unity in diversity or the fumes of hatred
Which burn dark hearts in the sanctity of homes.

Sages are to me, the mountains of my country.
From childhood to youth to parenthood;
Refuge they gave my helpless heart,
Blessed me when crossing overseas,
And were always here to welcome me back.

I love and respect the mountains of my country!

11/07/16
Contest: Mountains
Winner: 1st place.
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Chaudhary Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 12:09 PM
I remember of the great Himalayas by reading this poem. Congrats for your win.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 11:28 AM
Oh Himalayas's just world wonder! I adore it with all the myth attached to it. Thanks for the read. GL :) Sunita
Shaw Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 5:45 PM
No two mountians are the same - but just in case we gave them names - mountains are the watchers - the keeper of secrets - same as trees - one can return after many years to a place that has changed in so many ways - but once passed the new buildings and all the trees that have grown - seeing your mountain you really know you're home - beautifully wrote - Indiana x x x
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 11:56 PM
So true every immovable thing lies witness to lives lived around and if they had mouth they could relate history in the true version and one angle. Alas...but at least we human are given insight to respect them. In my religion, we worship a tree before cutting it if necessary and in so many other religion I've seen something common...Thanks :)
Williams Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 5:45 PM
Although I read a lot of your poems just now, Sunita, this one caught my eye due to your ability to virtually bring the mountains of your country to life. Nice win. Congratulations!! :) Bartholomew
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 9:49 AM
Thanks friend for your great words and the read. God bless you. :))
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:12 PM
wow, here is an amazing one I had not seen of yours. I see it got a trophy. AWesome win and big congrats to you. I bet those are lovely mountains. Utah has them too.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Thanks Andrea. Its so kind of you. Good luck in your endeavors! :)
Horn Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 7:50 AM
SUPD, Mountains and mile hills have been made by God, All powerful one who I love and laud. Jim Horn
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 12:43 PM
Glad you could link with this poem and I appreciate your kind visit. :) Regards Sunita
Breedt Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Hi Sunita, how profoundly patriotic your poem. I fall in love with you and your mountains. Thanks for finding me first and the kind comments you made. Now I must read your others
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 11:58 AM
This is such a heartfelt appreciation. I'm so glad you could link so closely with this poem and feel my adoration for mountains in my country. They gives the sign of being home. Thanks for the kind visit. Regards Sunita
Sewumber Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Great poem. It's a true history and I cherish it. Congrats, my friend.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Thanks! :)
Sewumber Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:09 AM
A true evaluation of thins mentioned in the poem and it draws much emotion towards mother nature. Good. Continue.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Agree with you...at time nature really conveys warm feelings and story unwinds in the mind.Thanks for stopping by and the encouraging comment. :) Sunita
Neumann Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 2:26 AM
Mountains are friends. Congratulations. Nature teaches us so much, when we take time to watch and listen. Your poem is a very good start for the day.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Thanks for going through and I'm happy you enjoy it, reading about nature is always refreshing. Reg Sunita :)
Derbyshire Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Mountain's always tell's the true stories , rich and beautifuly captured you Sunita. I am entertained .. Lionel ..South Africa
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 11:06 PM
Thank you for going through and the nice comment you left. True mountains are just mysteries...:) Sunita
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Thanks Wendy for going through and the nice words. Regards Sunita :)
Rycroft Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Congtats on your great poem win x
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Big congrats for your trophy win, Sunita. It's awesome to live by mountains. I do too!! your love for them is obvious here.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Hmmm, mountains, you just feel protected not only geographically, but there something weird about their silence. :) Thanks Sunita.
Cheema Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Sunita, congrats for your topmost podium! Highly deserving is your poem on Mountains, a silent observer! Balveen
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Thanks for going through. I really appreciate your warm words :) Sunita
Devnath  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Thanks so much for these kind words. Went through your writings. Enjoyed it as much. Keep on going. All the best. Are you a published poet? Sunita
A  Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Well done, Sunita...Skat
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Thanks Skat, glad you enjoyed it. Love Sunita :)
Misra Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Sunita, you have beautifully brought out the mountains as silent witnesses to the unfolding history and times of your country. Excellent take on the mountains theme. Aye mere pyare watan .... very evocative. Congratulations on a very well deserved firstplace in the contest! ~karam~
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Thanks Misra ji, mere choti si pyare watan, though India is the first left behind by ancestors...Regards Sunita :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Sunita, you can feel the dedication and love you have for your country...Congratulations on being number one.....
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Thanks Janis, ya true I love the feature and attractive spot of my country. Thanks for going through it. Regards Sunita
Roper Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Sunita, what a wonderful poem a well with great and loving emotion deserving 1st place , I have favorite it.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Thanks Eve, I'm honoured! :D thanks you appreciate it. Love Sunita
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Wow! can't believe it, thanks Julia Ward for sponsoring this interesting contest! :D
Ward Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 11:34 AM
There wasn't a jury... I was the judge of it, dear.
Chansarkar Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 8:32 AM
Lovely tribute to the strong mountains Sunita!many congratulations!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Ya, its metaphoric but I feel they could become alive in some other dimension...:) Thanks.
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Through your powerful 'mountains', so beautifully you tell about the love of your country which reflects so much happiness and sadness, Sunita. Amazing poem and congratulations on your Trophy First Place win in the Premiere Contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Thanks Sandra, I'm touched by your lovely words and very...happy that this poem has been appreciated. Hugs Sunita :)
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations on your win Sunita...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Thanks a lot, that so nice of you. :)
Rycroft Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 4:20 AM
Congrats well done great poem x
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Thanks so kind to go through it. :)
Wigley Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 1:38 AM
Strong and powerful write, from the heart. A worthy winner, well done Sunita. Viv
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Thanks so much for these nice words. :)
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