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Mountains of Bavaria

MOUNTAINS OF BAVARIA climbing, higher and higher. a breathtaking scene. horse and carriage clomps past us. an extraordinary castle in the mountains of Bavaria. lingering patience, as my thighs motivate their muscles, climbing ever higher to Ludwig’s sky. taking time to catch my breath. Neuschwanstein, fairy tale swoon of the Romance Road. the mountain chills in Winter, a wondrous white wool coat. Autumn spread of lime, gold and red cornucopia of colors. the castle built for length of years, not so for the King. but i, feel energized, as we approach the kingdom’s entrance, spying the height of the Alps we’ve climbed. the divine breast of paradise. 8/8/2017 Free verse Mountain Contest

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Date: 8/18/2017 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations , Kim .
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal!
Date: 8/18/2017 3:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kim, the imagery is fabulous ~*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 8/17/2017 5:08:00 AM
I was so enthralled with the castle and the location. It is absolutely divine and made me feel as if I was in a fairytale. You captured the beauty well in this masterful piece Kim! Congratulations! : )
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Date: 8/16/2017 8:58:00 PM
Exquisite write, Kim, and so full of poetic excellence ... I LOVE this! Gorgeous! Congrats on HM!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2017 9:51:00 PM
Thanks, Greg!
Date: 8/16/2017 8:06:00 AM
This sounds like a place I'd love to visit. Well done, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2017 9:50:00 PM
Thanks, Lin!
Date: 8/16/2017 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2017 9:50:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 8/16/2017 7:17:00 AM
Congrats Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2017 7:21:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 8/10/2017 12:13:00 PM
I have made that hike Kim! Crazy Ludwig! You describe it well. I enjoyed the color in this poem. -- Dean
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2017 12:32:00 PM
Thanks, Dean! The hike was well worth it. So the beauty of the castle was meant more for tourists. A Disney draft.

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