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Mountains

Living in the mountains experiencing their beauty everyday Appreciating their magnificence and remoteness where they lay Although clustered closely together larger than the mountains so vast The midnight sky is endless looking up as the stars go past Nestled deep within the mountain feeling safe within its heart Surrounded by rocks so jagged not wanting to depart The winter season is near bringing with it cold, ice and snow The danger that it brings means that it's now time to go Leaving behind the mighty rock a truly sacred place Dreaming until winter is over to return to the summer space 13/08/2017

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Date: 8/18/2017 3:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Susan, beautiful setting ~*
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:21:00 AM
Lovely imagery in this piece Susan! Congratulations on making the top three!
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Date: 8/16/2017 8:01:00 AM
I love the mountain's midnight sky! Congrats, Susan!
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:53:00 AM
A great write, Susan. well done.
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations Susan :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 3:27:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Susan, what a wonderful place it must be! I have spent much of my life skiing and in the mountains (in Winter) amidst their beauty - it is breathtaking, as is this beautiful poem! Congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 8/13/2017 11:39:00 AM
nice! i actually pictured a mountainous region all coloured in greens and blue. well done! cheers!
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