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Mountains

Some mountains have been there since the beginning of time, while there are other mountains that appear right in front of us, as we attempt to cross to another territory or territories with priceless treasure, but filled with dry bones of people who tried to carry all the treasures away, with their bare hands; alone. Sometimes we hear about the bones seen in the glittering territories, that we cower back to the foot of the mountains we climb. We are all mountaineers of life, whether we like it or not.....

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Date: 7/9/2016 2:35:00 AM
Very true...we need to look out for each other if our egos will lets us. I liked this philosophical piece! 7 ; )
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/9/2016 5:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Connie!! *^_^*
Date: 7/8/2016 5:29:00 PM
very cool analogy to life, TEddy. I quite enjoyed this one.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/9/2016 2:08:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!! *^_^*
Date: 7/8/2016 11:02:00 AM
Interesting; the last line sums it up nicely.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/8/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Phil, for commenting on my work!! :-)
Date: 7/8/2016 9:48:00 AM
Teddy, I like your take on the theme a 7 good luck in the contest . Hugs Eve
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/8/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve!! *^_^*

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