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Mountains

Mountains

As I look out from my window
I see there are mountains for me to climb
I would not much like to ignore them
But there waiting there for me; all the time

And though their boulders seem so trivial
Their precipice so very narrow
On the rocky slopes that I perceive
Seem so very steep

And there are mountains in my garden
Mountains in my sleep
These monoliths to my frustration
These monuments to my belief
Raise their convoluted flanks 
And excuse my lack of peace

So I raise my eyes to dizzy heights
Enveloped in confounding mist filled sides
And brook no easy compromise
And rather believe the truth has turned; to lies

And though their tricky crags seem so petty
It is cold determination which drives me 
To fathom every nook and cranny
Of these mountains I choose; to climb

Each foot I gain with conviction
As I scale to the imperious point
With the rattled landslide of berated argument
And every pebble is turned so neatly; on its back

And there are mountains in my shopping list
Mountains in my coffee cup 
These confusing megaliths to insignificance
These monuments to a principal
Raise their candid flanks 
And excuse my lack of peace

And there are mountains in my paper work
Mountains every day
Their spires and aspirations cloud my every vision
These giants of my dissatisfaction 
Raise their procrastinated flanks
To excuse my lack of peace

Yet with unwarranted enthusiasm
I shall dig at their very root
With no intention left to climb them
It is enough for me to believe; in their importance

And through their very heart I shall burrow
An excavation tunneled without regard
No worm or jewel shall deter me
I shall dig, kick, crawl and claw at my desires only enemy

I will prove to the world that mountains can be overcome
I will stand triumphant even if it is blood I have to spill
I shall burst into daylight from their hollow crown
As triumphant as a mole; upon its hill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/22/2009 11:22:00 AM
beautiful write. always, cherica lynn <3
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Date: 2/10/2009 9:32:00 PM
Hi Colin, Congrats for being featured this week. Love Iolanda
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:45:00 PM
Colin - Wonderfully written poem - Both your Love & Respect of the Mountains and your desire to conquer them are very present as you express your emotions regarding these areas so well - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/10/2009 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, Colin! "These monoliths to my frustration These monuments to my belief", I suppose these can loom-over head and make one feel small and insignificant, but your last verse is one for these mountains to contend with.:) Nicely penned. Blessings to you and yours..Mikki
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Date: 2/10/2009 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2009 7:05:00 AM
GREAT PIECE. THIS IS AWESOME. KEEP WRITING. YOUR PEN IS WONDERFUL.
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Date: 2/10/2009 5:00:00 AM
Congrats Colin, on "Mountains" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:03:00 AM
I love your message here... those mountains can sure be overwhelming, and yep, they seem to creep up everywhere, don't they. I found this very positive and uplifting... you summed it up perfectly in the final stanza: no matter the mountains, you will prove that they can be overcome, triumphantly. Excellent and so inspiring! :) Congrats on this well-deserved piece being featured! Love, Amy
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Date: 2/9/2009 12:22:00 AM
'Mountains every day'... wonderful write! ~ Arany
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