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06/09/25

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First Place

Contest by Sotto Poet

Mountain View at Night

    Mesmerised to watch marvellous Mountain View 
    with charismatic charms of CASCADE
    on continuous free fall.
    Sun is down bidding bye to fading twilight.
     Evening is slowly merging to turquoise night.
     Descent nascent crescent Moon peeps
     with shimmering glaze.
    
     A SERPENTINE silhouette spreads over starry tapestry
     with a MYRIAD of blue sapphires twinkling on hazy NEBULA 
     under enchanting LUNAR panorama.

      Vibrant waterfall is dancing frolic 
      in opulence of aqua flow
      from chasms of rigid mountain
      to LILT in mellifluous tune
      as if to entertain night farmament 
      staying in silent mode.

      Small stones broken from rocks to SLITHER.
      Serene sublime night to resonate 
      with rhythmic dynamic waterfall.

      Off and on water droplets sparkling
      in PHOSPHORUS glow reflected 
      by soft soothing Moon beam.
      Me floating on dream
      drinking dormant desires.
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Kauffman Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your win, Anisha! Your poem truly "frolics" through the stars. Blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Guptar Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sotto`s contest with a nice poem depicting mountain view through use of the given words.
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