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Poem: About betrayer/Political/ broken promises 



Mountain View 

With the ascended smoke
the sky was gloomy
Darkened times 
creeping up
stealing the era
Killing the resolve 
rhyming another song
Playing discordant tunes 
ragging the future of the now
saddled with a tinted view
The vision becomes blurry 
as the visionaries 
became soulless hordes
taking chunks of yesterday
From the hopes of today 

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