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Poem: About betrayer/Political/ broken promises
Mountain View
Mountain View
With the ascended smoke
the sky was gloomy
Darkened times
creeping up
stealing the era
Killing the resolve
rhyming another song
Playing discordant tunes
ragging the future of the now
saddled with a tinted view
The vision becomes blurry
as the visionaries
became soulless hordes
taking chunks of yesterday
From the hopes of today
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