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Mountain Solitude

* In solitude of the edge of day, there is a crimson blush along the hills And a world switches direction, ......as if to tumble into eternity Where shadows of the mountains, high, hover silently, over asphalt roads,..... bend and curl, and morph their shapes... to follow curves of earth When the shadow of a lonely pine becomes longer,....... than ever the tree was tall When my own silhouette, so dark and stretched, and long,...... seems to walk between earth and sky In utter harmony at end of day, my arms seem longer,... long enough,... to reach the evening star

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/9/2014 3:55:00 PM
wow, it is simply amazing! Congrats on one of the best poems in the contest.
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Date: 7/8/2014 11:33:00 PM
nice win..PD
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Date: 7/8/2014 9:02:00 PM
Beautiful Write, Carrie. Congrats on a great win, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/8/2014 1:10:00 AM
Amazingly wonderful write Carrie ! It's a masterpiece,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/7/2014 8:10:00 PM
I really enjoyed the imagery here, as Paul says those final two lines are wonderful. This piece had a win in another competition, well done. Well deserved.
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Date: 7/7/2014 4:57:00 PM
Lovely poem; lovely imagery; lovely final two lines. Well done, Carrie. Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 7/7/2014 11:17:00 AM
Carrie, this is absolutely beautiful. I love reaching for the evening star. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/21/2011 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Rick's contest "The Pink Evening Sky". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:38:00 PM
Love this poem! Ellen
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:17:00 PM
Hi Carrie - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Rick's contest. Best wishes, Kory (KC)
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Date: 2/3/2011 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, on your poem's top ten place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/3/2011 7:48:00 AM
Very beautiful and very moving, Carrie. Many congrat’s on your big win, Elaine
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:56:00 AM
Oh wow! I am faving this one! The imagery just jumps out at me and I am so loving how you ended this-- I felt chills-- honest! Love, love this :) Congrats Carrie :D -- hugs-- nikko :)
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:14:00 PM
CArrie, I feel like faving every single one of these pink evening poems, but I am worried how full my faves list is getting. haha. congratulations, I love this just like all the others. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:21:00 PM
Lovely poetry Carrie with wonderful images. Congrats on your win in Rick's fine contest....:)
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Date: 2/2/2011 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:08:00 AM
Wonderful poem Carrie !Congrats on your big win ---kashinath
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:09:00 PM
elegabt, carrie.. HEADS ofr the great win..:) hugggs, nette
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Date: 2/1/2011 8:15:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your exciting win in the Pink Sky contest with this perfect entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory ...
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Date: 2/1/2011 7:57:00 PM
Knew this was a winner.Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 2/1/2011 4:30:00 PM
A Beautiful piece Carrie!!!Love it!!!!Rick
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Date: 2/1/2011 4:27:00 PM
You write with such skill and grace, Carrie. This is a magnificent poem. Really like the way the growing shadows affect you and make your arms seem long enough to touch the sky. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:42:00 PM
wow, so awesome. So far, I have seen many incredible entries in this contest as well. A highest rating on this one!
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Date: 1/30/2011 5:02:00 AM
A great and beautiful entry Carrie ! Very nice ! Have a wonderful week dear poet ! much love, james
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