Heidi Sands Poet Sedoka

Mountain Ridge

The dark blue mountain
ridge like a statue in sky
Clouds with freedom passing by

Secure and stable
mountain ridge with tint of gray
A home for clouds to return

Heidi Sands

4/15/22

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Joanna Daniel April 21, 2022 at 7:19 PM A home for clouds to return - now, that's a brilliant thought, Heidi:) well written:) Heidi Sands April 21, 2022 at 8:43 PM Thank you very much Jo! Goodnight :)

Mystic Rose Rose April 21, 2022 at 6:29 AM Mountain are lovely and they feel invigorating to climb, nicely written poem dear lady, continue to bless us with your poetry Heidi :) Heidi Sands April 21, 2022 at 2:01 PM Yes , the mountains are beautiful. Thank you for your kind comment. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Gershon Wolf April 20, 2022 at 7:43 PM 'a statue in sky' 'Clouds with freedom passing by' --- I picture the Statue of Liberty in the Sky, Heidi. Wonderful imagery! :) Gershon Heidi Sands April 20, 2022 at 7:50 PM Nice Gershon! Thank you ! :)

Mike Gentile April 20, 2022 at 11:14 AM Heidi, I love the scene you painted with would beautiful words of nature! Peacul and serene! Happy Wednesday xxoo Heidi Sands April 20, 2022 at 4:43 PM Thank you Mike. I am happy to hear that. Happy Wednesday ! Xxoo

Judy Ball April 19, 2022 at 8:08 PM Lovely Heidi. I do love the mountains and living here on the prairie there is always the mountains in the distance calling to us. Nicely done. God Bless, JB Heidi Sands April 20, 2022 at 5:14 AM Thank you JB. Your mountains sound nice too. I remember mountains out west too and love them all. I appreciate your comment. I hope all is well :)

Demetrios Trifiatis April 19, 2022 at 5:52 AM The crown of the mountain ridge, dearest Heidi. Outstanding! Blessings. Heidi Sands April 19, 2022 at 6:21 AM Thank you very much Demetrios. I appreciate your kind comment. Blessings :)

Jennifer Proxenos April 18, 2022 at 11:10 AM Love that you have given the clouds a home, a cute poem again with beautiful imagery, hugs, blessings, Jennifer. Heidi Sands April 18, 2022 at 5:22 PM Thank you very much Jennifer. It is nice to see your comments. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Paul Callus April 16, 2022 at 12:42 PM Your words give added stature to this mountain ridge, Heidi...no wonder clouds keep returning there! ~ Best regards // paul Heidi Sands April 16, 2022 at 2:23 PM Hi Paul. Thank you very much. Happy Easter weekend :)

Vijay Pandit April 16, 2022 at 3:53 AM I see that tall statue in the sky as clouds freely pass by. It is a wonderful sight to see up high. Great images, Heidi. Heidi Sands April 16, 2022 at 6:18 AM Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear that. I hope you have a nice Easter :)

Quoth Theraven April 15, 2022 at 12:40 PM Heidi, A telling destiny in Mountains and clouds and the lucky few that call them home. -Richard Heidi Sands April 15, 2022 at 12:56 PM Thank you Richard I love the mountains. Happy Easter :)