Mountain Fawns

Mountain Fawns Above blazing celestial dawns Elegant fawns gait happily. Inventing joys keenly lived. Meeting nature, offers prayers… Mountain niches share God's abode. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 17, 2010 Poetic form: ABC

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2010 12:38:00 PM

Joyce, I am reviewing how people did the ABC poems. So far, from the list of winners, yours is the only one I rnjoy reading. I don't get it. CAn you explain to me why some people just have really long lines of words in alphabetic progression, while yours finishes with p and then repeats a final line with any chosen letter? I read the rules for this form and there is no good example to let me clearly envision the way to do this form!! congrats, by the way, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/4/2010 6:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Deborah's contest Dane Ann. Love,Carol

James Fraser

Date: 2/2/2010 12:41:00 PM

Beautiful poem Dane Ann, many congratulations on your win in Deborah's fine contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2010 6:43:00 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in the ABC contest.. wonderful win for a wonderful write.. blessings..luv.. Linda-Marie

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/18/2010 10:17:00 AM

I have enjoyed all of your beautiful poetry today my friend.... Keep your pen moving.....:JP]