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Mountain Fawns

Mountain Fawns

Above blazing celestial dawns
Elegant fawns gait happily.
Inventing joys keenly lived.
Meeting nature, offers prayers…
Mountain niches share God's abode.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    January 17, 2010

Poetic form: ABC

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Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2010 at 12:38 PM

Joyce, I am reviewing how people did the ABC poems. So far, from the list of winners, yours is the only one I rnjoy reading. I don't get it. CAn you explain to me why some people just have really long lines of words in alphabetic progression, while yours finishes with p and then repeats a final line with any chosen letter? I read the rules for this form and there is no good example to let me clearly envision the way to do this form!! congrats, by the way, Andrea