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Mountain Eye Candy

Written by Gail DeBole

Sculpted and preserved
Eroded into beauty;
Candy for the soul.


Haiku Mountain Week Contest
Eighth Place

Copyright © Gail Debole | Year Posted 2012

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November 27, 2012 at 9:19 AM

What a lovely way to look at a mountain-- yes, they have that certain scrumptious quality about them-- one can seem to look at them for a long time and not be tired-- thank you for your comments-- yes, sunshine and people can be healing indeed...

July 22, 2012 at 9:46 PM

You could be describing any number of mountains out west with this fine example of haiku.

July 15, 2012 at 5:41 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 13, 2012 at 12:33 PM

congrats Gail on a lovely write and win .. awesome imagery and a sweet title too luv.. thankxx for all your grand comments of uplifting and encouraging lines.. sweet to ,e..

Kathryn Collins

July 13, 2012 at 7:59 AM

Good luck - tweaked the sweet tooth of my eye.

Andrea Dietrich

July 13, 2012 at 12:58 AM

I remember this from before. It was one of my favorites. Big congrats.

July 12, 2012 at 10:22 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win in the Mountain Haiku contest...enjoyed...Love your title...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 12, 2012 at 7:44 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Gail. Love, Carol

July 12, 2012 at 7:26 AM

Gail congrats on your win...David

Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2012 at 7:57 PM

Gail, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD

July 9, 2012 at 2:10 PM

Very nice metaphor here - quite original. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

July 8, 2012 at 7:23 PM

Very nicely done, Gail.Love that line: eroded into beauty. And they surely do make great eye candy as well.

Poet Destroyer A

July 8, 2012 at 6:45 PM

Gail, ooo... i'm not peeking hope this is for my contest...pd

July 7, 2012 at 5:38 PM

great haiku! good luck in the contest!

Jonas L. Rozario

July 7, 2012 at 12:53 PM

Enjoyed your haiku...good luck in the contest.

Tanya Harrington

July 7, 2012 at 12:48 PM

Yummy haiku! Good luck! Tanya

July 7, 2012 at 12:32 PM

Very nice haiku for PD'S contest.Best wishes to you..

July 7, 2012 at 7:50 AM

I like your haiku, Gail. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

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