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Mountain- River

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tired mountain stands guard
watching landscapes through steep days
mists soften his paths

crest ripples in bops
river whirling late noon dance
frothy scent invites

charm drenches river
sprinkling mountain with kisses
dusk romance for two


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for Linda Marie’s Haiku Hodgepodge Trio
written by nette onclaud

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2012

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/13/2012 4:27:00 PM I was not here when this contest ran, belated congrats. Beautiful poem, enjoyed reading. I see why it was chosen. Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/5/2012 4:28:00 AM Nette.......Wonderful Haiku. I have been tring to master the Haiku and it's work like yours that inspires me to push myself a little harder. Wonderful job and congrats, cause you deserve it. This kind of writing is why I chose you as a fav poet. You just keep showing us (or, at least, me), how it's done. Nice job sweetheart. I am not going to say, " keep 'em coming", because I know you will and I read all your work. I may not comment on them, but I read them and like them all. Congrats....xoxo. Login to Reply Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/5/2012 4:30:00 AM Remember all my comments here the next time I enter one of your contests.......LMAO..... J/K.

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 1/31/2012 4:45:00 PM congrats on your 1st place win nette, lovely imagery as always; I love that last one, the river sprinkling the mountain with kisses, very romantic! :-) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 1/31/2012 2:00:00 PM Nicely done, Nette. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 1/31/2012 8:41:00 AM congrats on your first place win nette, beautifully done Login to Reply

Glenn Sentes Date: 1/31/2012 2:55:00 AM i'm imagining a love paradise! Here's to your countless firsts! Mabuhay ka, Binibining Nette! ;) Login to Reply

Spandan Karmakar Date: 1/31/2012 1:53:00 AM Congrats on your win in this contest Haiku hodge podge Net......spandan Login to Reply

Greg Stanley Date: 1/30/2012 9:46:00 PM Nette, so wonderful and such clear imagery, a well deserved win, congratulations, Greg Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 1/30/2012 8:28:00 PM Congratulation on your win for this wonderful poem,my friend. Loved it, bl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/30/2012 3:45:00 PM Congratulations, very well deserved win, Nette. Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 1/30/2012 3:43:00 PM Nette, congrats on your great win..David Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/30/2012 2:33:00 PM You go, gurl!! Just a wonderful nature lovin' win!! Congrats, Gwendolen Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 1/30/2012 2:18:00 PM An honor to share this spot with your beautiful poems! Congratulations, Nette! Login to Reply

Jon Arno Date: 1/30/2012 1:56:00 PM Congratulations on your nice win. Jon Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/30/2012 1:47:00 PM Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/30/2012 1:12:00 PM congrats Nette luv on first place win .. magnificent entry. thankxx luv.. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/26/2012 11:26:00 PM Nette, an amazing pack of haiku's..good luck in the contest..... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd Login to Reply

Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/26/2012 12:58:00 AM beautiful images Nette, blessings and all the very best, Bren : ) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/25/2012 9:21:00 AM thankxx Mette luv for supporting my contest.. good luck.. knowing I will be astounded once again luv.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/25/2012 7:54:00 AM I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/25/2012 6:10:00 AM Romancing the hills...what a great entry! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/25/2012 5:15:00 AM this is excellent, some awesome imagery here. harry Login to Reply

Spandan Karmakar Date: 1/25/2012 12:33:00 AM Hmmmm!A wonderful haiku, I liked more your haiku than mine nice one really loved reading it.......spandan Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/24/2012 10:58:00 PM wow, a stunning last line: sweet dusk reunion!! Love it, Nette, this is a shoe-in!! Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 1/24/2012 8:38:00 PM Oh, I so like yours more than mine! I especially enjoyed your last haiku, first line. charm drench... oh, lol, speaking of charm, please check out my blog, my reason for living. I posted a picture of my girl. I don't know how long I'll keep the blog up, as I am not comfortable putting her photo on the internet, but I so wanted to share this with my Soup pals. I know you've been curious. My angel with the dancing curls. She's tame in this one! LOL. The box is her idea. Hugs, Cyndi Login to Reply

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