Mountain- River

. .,.,……,.,,,,,, . tired mountain stands guard watching landscapes through steep days mists soften his paths crest ripples in bops river whirling late noon dance frothy scent invites charm drenches river sprinkling mountain with kisses dusk romance for two © …………. for Linda Marie’s Haiku Hodgepodge Trio written by nette onclaud
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Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 4:27 PM
I was not here when this contest ran, belated congrats. Beautiful poem, enjoyed reading. I see why it was chosen.
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 4:28 AM
Nette.......Wonderful Haiku. I have been tring to master the Haiku and it's work like yours that inspires me to push myself a little harder. Wonderful job and congrats, cause you deserve it. This kind of writing is why I chose you as a fav poet. You just keep showing us (or, at least, me), how it's done. Nice job sweetheart. I am not going to say, " keep 'em coming", because I know you will and I read all your work. I may not comment on them, but I read them and like them all. Congrats....xoxo.
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 4:30 AM
Remember all my comments here the next time I enter one of your contests.......LMAO..... J/K.
Puddifoot Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 4:45 PM
congrats on your 1st place win nette, lovely imagery as always; I love that last one, the river sprinkling the mountain with kisses, very romantic! :-)
Merryman Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Nicely done, Nette. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Roberts Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:41 AM
congrats on your first place win nette, beautifully done
Sentes Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 2:55 AM
i'm imagining a love paradise! Here's to your countless firsts! Mabuhay ka, Binibining Nette! ;)
Karmakar Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 1:53 AM
Congrats on your win in this contest Haiku hodge podge Net......spandan
Stanley Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 9:46 PM
Nette, so wonderful and such clear imagery, a well deserved win, congratulations, Greg
Devnath  Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 8:28 PM
Congratulation on your win for this wonderful poem,my friend. Loved it, bl
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Congratulations, very well deserved win, Nette.
Williams Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 3:43 PM
Nette, congrats on your great win..David
Song Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 2:33 PM
You go, gurl!! Just a wonderful nature lovin' win!! Congrats, Gwendolen
Richards Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 2:18 PM
An honor to share this spot with your beautiful poems! Congratulations, Nette!
Arno Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 1:56 PM
Congratulations on your nice win. Jon
Brown Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 1:47 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Nette. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 1:12 PM
congrats Nette luv on first place win .. magnificent entry. thankxx luv..
A   Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 11:26 PM
Nette, an amazing pack of haiku's..good luck in the contest..... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd
Northeast Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 12:58 AM
beautiful images Nette, blessings and all the very best, Bren : )
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 9:21 AM
thankxx Mette luv for supporting my contest.. good luck.. knowing I will be astounded once again luv..
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 7:54 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Nette. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Romancing the hills...what a great entry! Gwendolen
Horsman Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 5:15 AM
this is excellent, some awesome imagery here. harry
Karmakar Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 12:33 AM
Hmmmm!A wonderful haiku, I liked more your haiku than mine nice one really loved reading it.......spandan
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 10:58 PM
wow, a stunning last line: sweet dusk reunion!! Love it, Nette, this is a shoe-in!!
Macmillan Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 8:38 PM
Oh, I so like yours more than mine! I especially enjoyed your last haiku, first line. charm drench... oh, lol, speaking of charm, please check out my blog, my reason for living. I posted a picture of my girl. I don't know how long I'll keep the blog up, as I am not comfortable putting her photo on the internet, but I so wanted to share this with my Soup pals. I know you've been curious. My angel with the dancing curls. She's tame in this one! LOL. The box is her idea. Hugs, Cyndi
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