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MOUNTAIN- RIVER

. .,.,……,.,,,,,, . tired mountain stands guard watching landscapes through steep days mists soften his paths crest ripples in bops river whirling late noon dance frothy scent invites charm drenches river sprinkling mountain with kisses dusk romance for two © …………. for Linda Marie’s Haiku Hodgepodge Trio written by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/13/2012 4:27:00 PM
I was not here when this contest ran, belated congrats. Beautiful poem, enjoyed reading. I see why it was chosen.
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Date: 2/5/2012 4:28:00 AM
Nette.......Wonderful Haiku. I have been tring to master the Haiku and it's work like yours that inspires me to push myself a little harder. Wonderful job and congrats, cause you deserve it. This kind of writing is why I chose you as a fav poet. You just keep showing us (or, at least, me), how it's done. Nice job sweetheart. I am not going to say, " keep 'em coming", because I know you will and I read all your work. I may not comment on them, but I read them and like them all. Congrats....xoxo.
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Date: 2/5/2012 4:30:00 AM
Remember all my comments here the next time I enter one of your contests.......LMAO..... J/K.
Date: 1/31/2012 4:45:00 PM
congrats on your 1st place win nette, lovely imagery as always; I love that last one, the river sprinkling the mountain with kisses, very romantic! :-)
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:00:00 PM
Nicely done, Nette. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:41:00 AM
congrats on your first place win nette, beautifully done
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:55:00 AM
i'm imagining a love paradise! Here's to your countless firsts! Mabuhay ka, Binibining Nette! ;)
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win in this contest Haiku hodge podge Net......spandan
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Date: 1/30/2012 9:46:00 PM
Nette, so wonderful and such clear imagery, a well deserved win, congratulations, Greg
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:28:00 PM
Congratulation on your win for this wonderful poem,my friend. Loved it, bl
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations, very well deserved win, Nette.
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:43:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:33:00 PM
You go, gurl!! Just a wonderful nature lovin' win!! Congrats, Gwendolen
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:18:00 PM
An honor to share this spot with your beautiful poems! Congratulations, Nette!
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your nice win. Jon
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:12:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on first place win .. magnificent entry. thankxx luv..
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Date: 1/26/2012 11:26:00 PM
Nette, an amazing pack of haiku's..good luck in the contest..... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:58:00 AM
beautiful images Nette, blessings and all the very best, Bren : )
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Date: 1/25/2012 9:21:00 AM
thankxx Mette luv for supporting my contest.. good luck.. knowing I will be astounded once again luv..
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Date: 1/25/2012 7:54:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:10:00 AM
Romancing the hills...what a great entry! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/25/2012 5:15:00 AM
this is excellent, some awesome imagery here. harry
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Date: 1/25/2012 12:33:00 AM
Hmmmm!A wonderful haiku, I liked more your haiku than mine nice one really loved reading it.......spandan
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:58:00 PM
wow, a stunning last line: sweet dusk reunion!! Love it, Nette, this is a shoe-in!!
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Date: 1/24/2012 8:38:00 PM
Oh, I so like yours more than mine! I especially enjoyed your last haiku, first line. charm drench... oh, lol, speaking of charm, please check out my blog, my reason for living. I posted a picture of my girl. I don't know how long I'll keep the blog up, as I am not comfortable putting her photo on the internet, but I so wanted to share this with my Soup pals. I know you've been curious. My angel with the dancing curls. She's tame in this one! LOL. The box is her idea. Hugs, Cyndi
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