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Orphan Sonnet
Created by: Dale Gregory Cozart with a rhyme scheme of Abab cdcd efef aA in three quatrains and a final couplet with the last line repeating the opening line.

In Alaska, near Mount Edgecumbe's feet, fish built Sitka, a city with no road. And so, Sitka's fame is its fishing fleet; where time is never spent; it is borrowed. A scarlet sun bleeds on Edgecumbe's peak as deafening silence splashes on shore. And its surreal sunsets are unique, unlike anything you have seen before. Crimson clouds merge with ebony shadows, and a plethora of stars light the dark. Yet the night starts falling like dominoes, calm chaos acting like an accent mark. Paradise is an off-the-grid retreat in Alaska near Mount Edgecumbe's feet.

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Date: 5/22/2023 12:00:00 PM
Emile, wonderfully written with your hallmark imagery. You have captured the uniqueness of Sitka. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/22/2023 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, Sam; it is always a pleasure to hear from you, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/19/2023 12:00:00 PM
Hello Emile, o-h-h-h Alaska sounds beautiful.I have never been there Emile. My friend enjoy your day. /Darlene\ I
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/20/2023 12:14:00 PM
Hello Emile, Oh , I hope i do get ot see it one day. You are welcome my dear friend. Happy long weekend. /Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/19/2023 12:35:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, I hope you get to see it one day, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/19/2023 10:43:00 AM
nice description of Alaskan landscape. I wish I could be there. Thanks for sharing. Enter the contest, it is a winner.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/19/2023 12:34:00 PM
Thanks, Jay; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/19/2023 9:25:00 AM
keep up the great work.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/19/2023 10:31:00 AM
Thanks, Thaqiya; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

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