Motionless Is Deceptive

The frost is in my toes, 
                                         riming the up tilted boulders,
and twinkling the night sky, 
                                                  like a cold breath blown
and whooshing clear off the plateau into the arms
of the universe. 
                              Ah, standing still is spinning
all axis in step to be motion free except the heated
breath of the stars condensing and exploding.
Just diamonds or dewdrops, 
                                                   a taste of eternity
swallowed. 
                     Analyzed. 
                                        Understood. 
                                                                 And gone.
Me scrunching down, counting the meter
until full exposure. 
                                  Listening for the mating cries
of crickets absent in the last dying down of autumn.
I hold onto my self, then. 
                                               Great big hug and release.
Fall into the tumble of earth churned rock.
                                                                             No one
but me
                   to see  the castaway burning through
to my side. Call them meteorite, spore, seed planted
for tomorrow traveling the empty spaces of time
wondering when, how, where the tick tick tick
of radiation
                      changes our bodies and our minds.
To be melted down, patted onto others, cataclysmic
blown and find a way to solidify, decorate
                                                                             and blaze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Arnone Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:12 PM
Wow. That was some trip. Someone get me my spacesuit. Images that span the infinite multiverse. ;-)
Squyres Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 3:34 PM
Love the movement in the poem and the layout is unique, showing and allowing the reader to feel the movement even more. Excellent poem !!
Jordan Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 8:19 AM
Nicely done. The imagery is beautiful. Jack
Michelle Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 10:27 PM
love the write and a very hooking title. i love your thoughts, so clear and deep. -JuliMichelle
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sandy Ivy's "Viewing Life" contest Sheri. Love Carol
Gasun Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your super win my dear Sheri! love/hugs, Leonora
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December 5, 2012 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on your win. xx
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Liwayway Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 6:27 AM
congrats friend Sheri on your fine win. a very creative write :) hugs, Maria
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December 4, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Congrats on your win!
Guzzi Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:02 PM
Very unique..a torent of well placed words! congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A   Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 6:08 PM
Sheri, a fine #1... thank you for the view through your lens.... . :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda
Ivy D Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 4:26 PM
Congrats :-) Sandy
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 9:54 AM
Great imagery and for me this one is more about motion than not. I felt the falling and the melting! a unique poem.
La France Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 7:13 AM
Sheri, well done, I love your layout and your profound words, Constance
Kendrick Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:05 AM
I really enjoyed reading this one..I have had several ah-ha moments in this one but still not certain of the interpertation of which you intended..Thanks for stopping by..I find your interperation of my work about those lost without Christ the Redeemer of great interest..Your presence at my work was very uplifting..Sara
Ludden Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:05 AM
I am highly privileged this morning to read the work of a fine and thoughtful poet. In making it available, you have given me a positive, rewarding start to a day that had looked to be less than ordinary. You may be sure I shall read more, and I have summoned up the temerity to hope you may also look at more of mine; thanks for the treat, Sheri.
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November 27, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Very cool, your poem is motionless yet it moved me along. Even the way you placed your words gives it the illusion of motion. Well done!
A   Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 12:42 AM
Sheri, I see how something without motion can deceive the eye... I like the image of diamond dewdrops... and the ending blaze in your poem...a clever poem... tasting eternity...pd
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