Motionless

She stood on the road motionless as a statue The deer looked at me Then, I watched it leap away freely, into the bushes Heidi Sands 6/9/18

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Date: 6/12/2018 11:10:00 AM

The moment perfectly captured, Heidi. Kudos! P.S. needs a Tanka contest for this one to capture a trophy! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2018 2:34:00 PM

Thank you Gershon! That is kind of you to say! :)

Date: 6/9/2018 9:38:00 PM

Nice!

Date: 6/9/2018 7:53:00 PM

Nice!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2018 7:55:00 PM

Thank you Mike :)

Date: 6/9/2018 12:58:00 PM

- A beautiful moment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2018 1:06:00 PM

Thank you Ann-Lise :)

Date: 6/9/2018 12:37:00 PM

A perfect moment captured. Lovely :) xomo

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2018 12:52:00 PM

Thank you Maureen. It was very nice to see today :)

Date: 6/9/2018 12:16:00 PM

Very nicely written Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2018 12:19:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. :)