Heidi Sands Poet Tanka

Motionless

She stood on the road
            motionless as a statue
            The deer looked at me
       Then, I watched it leap away
            freely, into the bushes

Heidi Sands

6/9/18

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Gershon Wolf June 12, 2018 at 11:10 AM The moment perfectly captured, Heidi. Kudos! P.S. needs a Tanka contest for this one to capture a trophy! :) gw Heidi Sands June 12, 2018 at 2:34 PM Thank you Gershon! That is kind of you to say! :)

Mike Hauser June 9, 2018 at 9:38 PM Nice!

Mike Hauser June 9, 2018 at 7:53 PM Nice! Heidi Sands June 9, 2018 at 7:55 PM Thank you Mike :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2018 at 12:58 PM - A beautiful moment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands June 9, 2018 at 1:06 PM Thank you Ann-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 9, 2018 at 12:37 PM A perfect moment captured. Lovely :) xomo Heidi Sands June 9, 2018 at 12:52 PM Thank you Maureen. It was very nice to see today :)

Joseph May June 9, 2018 at 12:16 PM Very nicely written Heidi.. Heidi Sands June 9, 2018 at 12:19 PM Thank you Joseph. :)