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the gurgling brook sings a song coming from the trees spring is in motion Heidi Sands 3/30/21

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Date: 4/29/2021 2:21:00 AM
Nice write Heidi, really takes the reader to the brook.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2021 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Scott :)
Date: 4/4/2021 1:46:00 PM
Ahhh!! I guess the brook is over flowing its banks in some places because of extra rain, snow and melting ice. Your presence at my page is delightful. Sara
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Date: 4/4/2021 3:46:00 PM
That is true too Sara. Thank you. :)
Date: 4/2/2021 6:01:00 AM
How happy you must be my friend, lovely if one is witness to such a scene be blessed always and let your pen write wonderful poems just like this amazing haiku. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/2/2021 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer :)
Date: 3/31/2021 10:20:00 AM
Total beauty Pangie xxxx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2021 2:51:00 PM
Thank you Pangie. I hope all is well :)
Date: 3/30/2021 5:58:00 PM
Those first two lines are magical, Heidi! A wonderful haiku! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/31/2021 5:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim :)
Date: 3/30/2021 11:48:00 AM
Sweet song of Spring, Wonderful write Heidi, love it...hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2021 12:04:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph. I am happy to hear you love it. Hugs :)

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