Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Mother’s One-Way Ticket

Our sweet mother went to heaven one Spring day.
Four years ago, the flowers folded their wings.
Hymns, ethereal in the fog; smile at bay.
Left at table, in closet, on shelves - her things.
Most dearly departed, her ticket one-way.
And my father cheers her urn each day.
She’s in our hearts, our thoughts are off and flying.
This family is strong; I am not crying.

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Line Gauthier April 24, 2025 at 10:07 AM It's very wise to let the memory live on in a setting of love and harmony. Our departed loved ones are watching over us and do not want us to waste our energy and precious time crying Kim Rodrigues April 24, 2025 at 5:34 PM True! Even at the beginning I could hear my mom (in my head) saying “Stop it, Kimmy.” and I did. Hugs

Maria Williams April 21, 2025 at 10:55 PM Dear Kim,this is so tender and beautifully written. Your words carry both the ache of loss and the quiet strength of love that endures. The image of your father cheering her urn is deeply touching—both heartbreaking and heartwarming. There’s such grace in how you’ve honored her memory while also showing the resilience of your family. Thank you for sharing this—it moved me deeply....Hugs Kim Rodrigues April 22, 2025 at 1:47 PM Thank you, Maria! I appreciate you letting me know how you felt. Hugs!

Yann Rolland April 21, 2025 at 2:48 AM memories keep mothers alive, a very touching poem, praying for my mother too, courage my friend in these special days Kim Rodrigues April 22, 2025 at 1:48 PM God bless you and your sweet mother! Thank you, Yann!

Gershon Wolf April 20, 2025 at 10:29 PM 'Left on table - her things.' So poignant, and such a touching way to always have Mom in mind. Beautiful penning, Kim. Kim Rodrigues April 22, 2025 at 1:49 PM Thank you, Gershon!

Paige Hind April 20, 2025 at 9:22 PM Lovely - enjoyed <3 :) Kim Rodrigues April 22, 2025 at 1:49 PM Thank you :)

Joe Maverick April 20, 2025 at 9:46 AM Smiles and love in Jesus.' Stay strong Kim.) Kim Rodrigues April 22, 2025 at 1:51 PM Thank you, Joe! Hugs

Sam Kauffman April 19, 2025 at 1:21 PM Kim, what a beautiful, faith-filled tribute to your mom. It is rich in memories yet filled with life that continues without her. I am deeply touched by this poem on so many levels. Sending you Easter joy! ?? Kim Rodrigues April 20, 2025 at 7:58 AM Happy Easter, dear Sam! We celebrate the Hope of our risen Lord and Savior! Thank you.

Jennifer Proxenos April 19, 2025 at 3:22 AM Besides their obvious absence, the presence of their things scattered all over the house is a constant reminder that they have left on a one-way ticket, where we know they will be happy because the were good people and hope now and then they will send us a message in our dreams. HUGS, Jennifer. Kim Rodrigues April 22, 2025 at 1:56 PM Thank you for your kind message!

Karen Jones April 18, 2025 at 1:51 PM Wow this is a beautiful tribute Kim! Her love gives you strength! Nice! Kim Rodrigues April 20, 2025 at 7:54 AM Thank you, dear one!

Oliver Mckeithan April 18, 2025 at 12:48 PM Wonderful Kim. You have great memories of your mother Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2025 at 1:30 PM Yes! Thank you, Oliver :)

Sotto Poet April 18, 2025 at 9:12 AM Really lovely setting, Kim: Love and faith are the most powerful connections. Condolences for your loss. Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2025 at 1:30 PM 4 years ago…but thanks, Lasaad!

Michael Maul April 18, 2025 at 8:34 AM It's never easy losing a parent. My condolences on your loss. Great piece of writing. Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2025 at 1:30 PM Thank you, Michael!

Joseph P. DiMino April 18, 2025 at 6:34 AM Faith and love, are the strongest bonds. As like you, I feel they are eternal. Blessings my friend. Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2025 at 1:31 PM Thank you, Joe!

Edward Ibeh April 18, 2025 at 5:24 AM Beautifully composed, Kim:-) Enjoyed the read. Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2025 at 1:31 PM Thank you, Edward! :)

Nette Onclaud April 18, 2025 at 1:56 AM a most profound tribute to a mom wonderfully handled, kim. Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2025 at 5:10 AM Thank you, Nette. Mom died 4 years ago…like yesterday but not. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2025 at 11:21 PM So poignant and succinct. Love it. Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2025 at 5:11 AM Thank you, Andrea