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Sunset, Jan 2025. 

Mother's Milk



"Mother’s Milk"

I don’t know -
what would you have me say?

Life is a gourmand perfume 
rolling along on the notes of air 
intoxicating musk a jubilee
music you breathe and reign in

words lactonic heaven scent
stimulating the beginning and the end
in synaesthesia the let-down presents
succulent life, a moment brief and swift

a hint of warm peppered cinnamon
with gunshot sparks recalcitrant pink
a straight shot from the heady accord first off 
hard points from mother’s breast rouge the plot

we drink it all in 
life is the sweetest illusion 
bittersweet and burnt bent
we are all drunk to it;

before we begin,
we begin again, 
we are swallowed large 
into this small life 

like an unknown mystery

karmic charms chime in
fragrant and in fragrant notes
recalcitrant journeys
roads less taken 

sweet and bitter almonds
we hear the distant bells chime
we sign off reluctantly 
to only begin it all again


Candide Diderot. ‘25
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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March 10, 2025 at 5:01 PM
"I feel a thousand capacities spring up in me. I am arch, gay, languid, meloncholy by turns. I am rooted, but I flow." Virginia Woolf, "The Waves".
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March 10, 2025 at 5:21 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Waves
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March 10, 2025 at 5:15 PM
https://gutenberg.net.au/plusfifty-n-z.html#woolf
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March 10, 2025 at 4:58 PM
"Born to Die"/Lana del Rey
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March 10, 2025 at 4:59 PM
https://youtu.be/uN46mvvLauQ?si=ZU0e0Qlz3PbKvdE3
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March 10, 2025 at 4:57 PM
Gourmand.
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March 10, 2025 at 4:58 PM
Bianco Latte/Giardini di Toscana
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