Mother's Love Resubmitted


"No poem can encompass mother's love in its entirety"
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None can be as loving as a mother
She will pray for you, stay awake for you
No one can serve selflessly like mother
Ever helpful walks extra mile for you

She will ensure you are always well fed
If needed will feed you with her own hands
Will never eat until you are well fed
Your hungry stomach she just cannot stand

Looking at just face she can read your mind
She can forsee your problems in advance
Your happiness is always in her mind
With foresight will warn you well in advance

No one else can love you like a mother
Like her you will never find another

Date: 10/5/2020 

N/A in Love Sonnet contest by John Hamilton
Judged 10/19/2020 10:52:00 AM 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Rama, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge _Constance
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 6:35 AM
Thanks. Your contests are interesting. Regards Rama
Ashley Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Rama, you capture the all-encompassing power and dedication of a mother's love with poetic beauty. Every line to be treasured. Congratulations with your fine win in Constance's contest.. ~Susan
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Thanks and same to you. As I said above no poem can encompasse mothers love in its entirety. It is the most selfless and purest form of love. If it were not a sonnet I would have written more. Have a great day ahead friend.
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October 5, 2020 at 8:11 AM
Beautiful sonnet..
Balasubramanian Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:35 AM
Thanks. Compliment from you makes my day. Take care. Warm regards Rama
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