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Mother Zamia Tree

A lot of really big trees had died to make that desk. His mother had probably gnawed them down, used her nails to saw the boards, and finished the decorative cutwork with her tongue. Jennifer Crusie
My mom kept a patch of zamia trees, freeze brook zigzagged and zinged, zesty zephyr's laid cape from breeze, zap zander tinned. She accomplished zoning using a zax, she led my zest and dream, I can't cool off, I can't relax, zealous esteem. She shields me from rain and zenithal wind, she kept zeal to be strong, by lead and zaniness of mind, zigs right from wrong. 1St Place Contest Winner 21-December-2022 Constance La France Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing form Rhyme pattern: abab, cdcd, efef syllable pattern: 10, 6, 8, 4 in each stanza
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Kauffman Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 12:05 PM
Zounds, Lasaad! Congratulations on this delight winner full of zealous "z's." Had such fun reading it. It reminded me of my Zany Z's poem. You must have had fun writing this one. It reveals your whimsical soul. Blessings my friend!
La France Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 7:34 AM
Sotto ,congratulations on your placement in my Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing, I love your words, pic, and quote, well done, Constance
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 10:33 AM
Awesome verse with alterations, Lasaad, and the photo is gorgeous . Congratulations on your 1st place win in Constance’s contest. Hugs blessings, Eve
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 3:37 AM
A tongue twisting winner. Way to go. Congratulations...Sara
Alex Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 10:41 PM
Great scenic work on Zamia Tree. Congratulations!
George Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Back to your Zamia tree with congratulations on your well deserved first place win.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:34 PM
Love those leading lines! An interesting read to be discovered! Congratulations on first place, Lasaad!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 11:00 AM
A touching memory you’ve shared, Lasaad, and your detailed writing incorporating the letter “Z” was a very nice touch my friend. My compliments on your choice 1st Place win. Aloha William
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 10:19 AM
very interesting use of the Z sound in your whimsical poem! I think it must have been fun for you to write this.
George Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 7:59 PM
So skillfully composed.... keeping strict adherence to the norms. Zestful and zealous ! All the Best !
Goldsmith Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 11:21 AM
WOW!!! What a write/picture. Your pen was working overtime. Off to "Z" land. Have a blessed day...........
Pandit Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Zestful poem my friend, adorned with "Z"s. Best to you.
Cunningham Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 8:48 AM
You rose well to the challenge Lasaad. Perfect poetry. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
Boles Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 8:03 AM
A definite winner for me! Deep, wit and humor encrypted metaphors, very clever usage of words. Bravo Poet Lasaad!!...ab
Buhagiar Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 7:23 AM
Beautiful, both picture and poem. Best for a win.
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