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In memory of my mother, Jacqueline

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Mother Was My Friend


Mother had me when she was just a young woman,
at birth I was her baby- then her girl;
                               but, things soon changed,
                                 I became-   friend.

We talked and shopped, gardened, laughed and we took short trips,
mother had an adventurous spirit;
we spent many long hours on country roads,
it was fun to get lost and find a special place.

        I often ask God why he took
        my mother, so young to Heaven?

                            But, still treasure
                              those sweet moments !


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February 5, 2021


Poetry/Verse/Mother Was My Friend
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1326-344-05
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France


Written for the Premiere contest, Fragmented Verse
sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 03/04/2021

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kaufman Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Belated congratulation Ms. Constance for a lovely tribute to your mother, very touching.
La France Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Nancy, thanks for the congratulations and comment, I miss my mother every single moment, hour and day _Constance
Fowler Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Sweet and moving write Constance. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
La France Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Linda, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Pinet Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your amazing poem has placed "Third" in my contest. Your poem was special and caught my eye. Very well done my friend.
La France Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Emile, thank you for the contest and for my placement and the comment and congratulations. I am proud you used my created form for the contest as it always makes beautiful poetry _Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 7:34 PM
Constance, this is so beautiful and so touching! Mother is the best friend - so true ~ Mala
La France Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Mala, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment_Constance
Jayasankar Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 12:02 AM
Oh woww...a mother's role in a child's upbringing, till she herself becomes one and beyond that... it is just incomparable.. a mother's patience and perseverance well captured dear friend, though this is sad and emotional dear friend. I wish to fav this gem. Hugs ~ Ani
La France Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 4:42 AM
Ani, thanks for the visit and the nice comment and the FAV, appreciate so much, when I lost my mother, I also lost my best friend _Constance
Brul Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 6:27 PM
So beautiful!! A masterpiece of the heart!! Another FAVE!!!
La France Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 5:22 AM
JCB, thank you for the complete, and the FAV, no greater compliment _Constance
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