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A Mother Figure, Sponsor: Suzette Richards, May 6, 2026

Mother Tree

free flowing hair, wistfully twisting in childhood.
   SHE plants her feet firmly;
   HER foundation of safety and security.
   HER heart beats petals of joy;
   HER inner mouth curves upwards.
   but like a sturdy oak, with boughs on hips,
   and like an owl, with steady gaze,
HER eyes will follow the girl’s date as he pulls her outdoors,
   for he forewarned HER, this teen in a trench coat.
    SHE adapts to the darkness of the Black Forest.
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Anaya Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 1:26 PM
Lovely tribute for mothers day Kim, congratulations on your win! metaphoric dyrad perhaps~
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:30 PM
Truly about a mother! 2nd and 3rd line based on real incident. Hugs.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 4:26 PM
like your interpretation of the contest prompt/theme. Faving
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 5:26 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Hind Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 2:30 PM
This is dark and subtle. The things we carry...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 5:17 PM
Thank you! Truly!
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