MOTHER SAID

Never go out on a stomach that’s empty,
Was one of my mother’s foibles.
If it’s only a salad sandwich,
You’ll ward off possible problems.
And always drink plenty of liquid
Or you’ll find you’ll run out of oomph.
She was always there to tend my wounds
(I was always hurting something)
My comfort when I was anxious,
She was my guardian angel
Though hard up, she denied me nothing.
Perhaps, looking back, I was spoilt.
But I’ll always remember her comments
If I live to be a hundred.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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mysore Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 3:23 AM
so nice, ' I’ll always remember her comments', congratulations on your win dear poet.
Miller Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 7:39 AM
wonderful poem, congratulations
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September 15, 2024 at 4:59 AM
Good one. I enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congratulations..Sara K
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