Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Mother Nature's Priceless Rembrandt

Dawn is nature's blank canvas
painting linear liquid hues
Delicate dripping and splashing
layering in peaches, pinks, 
and violets with golden 
tints too
Blending array of colors
Expressing an artistic view
Her brush dances in 
curvaceous slants with a 
vigorous sweeping technique 
Boldly it never ceases to add its 
own vibrant colored contrast
Leaving me in awe of 
Mother Nature's
own priceless Rembrandt 

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Contest; your choice max 333 words
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Richard Lamoureux September 11, 2019 at 8:40 AM This is so pretty. Congrats on your win. Hugs Rick Brenda Chiri September 11, 2019 at 3:00 PM So pretty? Lol thanks rick you are far too kind!;)

L. J. Carber September 11, 2019 at 8:39 AM Nicely done metaphor--congrats, Brenda! Brenda Chiri September 11, 2019 at 3:00 PM Thanks appreciate the comment and congrats!;)

Susan Ashley September 11, 2019 at 8:03 AM Ahh, such poetic beauty danced from your golden pen, dear sister, across the dawning skies and upon my heart and imagination. Inspiring poetry with gorgeous imagery and a silky flow. A Rembrandt in your poetic artistry. Congratulations on your wonderful win, my lovely yet still crazy twin. Love and hugs always.. your sane sissy <3 Brenda Chiri September 11, 2019 at 2:59 PM Ah the sane one of our trio! Thank you my sane sissy!;) you kniw I have the insane on lock! Hahaha! Thanks so much Susan for your kind words!;)

Line Gauthier September 11, 2019 at 8:01 AM Lovely, Brenda. Congrats on your well deserved win. Brenda Chiri September 11, 2019 at 2:57 PM Line thank you so much!;) I appreciate that!;)

Paul Marc September 11, 2019 at 8:01 AM Congrats on a well deserved win. Brenda Chiri September 11, 2019 at 2:57 PM Thank you so much!;)

Sandra Adams September 11, 2019 at 6:48 AM Congratulations on your win with this beauty ;) hugs Brenda Chiri September 11, 2019 at 2:57 PM Thanks so much Sandy!;)

John Fleming September 7, 2019 at 9:39 AM This particular poem has a strange quality attached to it. I understand it is free verse of course but there is something else: something elusive and almost indefinable. I think it is a rare example, and without the writer being aware at the time of writing, that although they are writing in free verse they are in fact also bordering on the very edge of almost creating a ryming sound within the poem; on the odd occasion I too have done this myself...it makes for lovely sounding poetry. :) john Brenda Chiri September 7, 2019 at 11:21 AM Ahh thank you John! It is one that just flowed out through my pen! Does not surprise me if a bit of s rhyme came with it! You know I love my rhyme and the two shall come together at some point I guess! Your words words warm my heart John! You are too kind! Your work is amazing and your ability to write it in the old way of words are beyond words! I just love it when you read them to me;)

Gershon Wolf September 5, 2019 at 8:10 PM Yes, me too. Dawn is, indeed, an awe-inspiring time/experience. Well-captured, Brenda! :) gw Gershon Wolf September 11, 2019 at 4:29 PM Here's to your well-deserved win in the contest, Brenda! :) gw Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 9:54 PM Gershon thank you so much!;)

Kim Rodrigues September 4, 2019 at 7:00 PM Great title and imagery! Applause! Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 1:05 AM Thanks Kim much appreciated!;)

Constance La France September 4, 2019 at 11:29 AM Brenda, this is so beautifully penned. You have painted a master piece with words ! Brenda Chiri September 4, 2019 at 12:03 PM Thank you so very much! I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the read and the comment!;)

Paul Callus September 4, 2019 at 5:35 AM Even your excellent poem leaves me in awe, Brenda. You paint with words, using vivid colours and a personalized striking technique. ~ Warm regards // paul Brenda Chiri September 4, 2019 at 12:02 PM Ahh Paul thank you so very much! You are too kind!;)

Sandra Adams September 3, 2019 at 6:50 PM This is gorgeous...i love the skies offerings every day...you paint it into a masterpiece through your words! Wonderful penning Brenda! :) hugs Brenda Chiri September 3, 2019 at 7:58 PM Sandy thank you so much! I love things like this! It just hasn't been until recently that I've been writing it! You are too kind!;)

Chris Green September 3, 2019 at 4:26 PM Incredibly beautiful, your words paint a picture that is comparable to a Rembrandt and other masters of time. This is exceptional. I hope others take the time to read and comment on this wonderful piece of writing. Brenda Chiri September 3, 2019 at 4:34 PM Thanks so much Chris! But I think I'm back to not many comments! No biggie I guess! But thank you for the read and wonderful comment!;)