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Author's Notes: This is a fantasy narrative poem. Liam McDaid and I wrote this as a collaborative effort. Enjoy the read!! (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid -- July 5, 2015) (Narrative) 

Categories:  allegory, beauty, celebration, emotions, fantasy, i love you, and imagery.

Mother Nature’s Little Prince A most beautiful little green frog swims quietly and so gracefully While his eyes gaze gently on a mountain looming in the distance. He’s at ease as he swims in a deep forest pond warmed by the sun. Lost catching flies inside the shadows as an echo holds on to a Certain gentle stillness within him humming with burning sighs. This little green frog was called “Froggy” by Mother Nature, And he was her little precious star-light promise of pretty colors. Froggy was the Gem of Her Eyes: handsome, funny and intelligent With kindness so overwhelming and a soft-touching tenderness. He was talkative, and quiet princely by his apparent noble mien. Froggy had a divine hope and destiny to wish for a dream princess. Mother Nature knew that “Her Froggy” was indeed so magical as His golden fingers of light painted a rainbow array of new born life. “Her Froggy” was much more than a mere amphibian in this life, Although he was dark green and sprinkled with light black spots. Froggy lay on a lily leaf faraway as his thoughts sailed freely into Another world, where his most infectious and funny smile made him Quite popular and noticeable to a beautiful young fairy princess who Was smitten instantly with his looks and his princely correct behavior. For the young fairy princess it was love at first sight—and so precious! Froggy was slowly changing and love became his desire and passion. With a purity shone silver in streaming beauties of light pure gold At the rainbow’s end was a bridge of his loving tears as he sang a Melodious song of love with a supreme confidence for the princess. Upon meeting his princess their mutual fate was woven now as one. Mother Nature’s enchanted wish for “Her Froggy” and his princess Was now at hand for their love and emotion were now blended as one. All that remained was that magical kiss to make them both human. When these two beings of wondrous beauty kissed—the very stars And comets in Heaven above shone so brightly that night became day! With love and the omnipotent and majestic whisk of God’s divine hand, Froggy and his princess metamorphosed into complete human form! This was truly a sight in Heaven itself to behold and cherish for eternity! Now they were a royal pair: A prince and his princess in love—reflected In the radiant colored light of a mystical rainbow of heavenly direction. Mother Nature cried joyous tears of hope and happiness at this splendid Occurrence, making the very rivers on Earth flow in a great abundance With the sweetest and purest mountain spring water one could imagine! Now as “Her Froggy”—a real prince now—kissed his princess again, God’s angels anointed them with heavenly star dust shining so brightly! The new prince now known as “Frederic,” and his princess took their Royal places in human society with no one ever suspecting or knowing From whence or where they came, and their divine relationship to Mother Nature herself, which was her secret and their secret shared Together and forever to the very end of time! Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (July 5, 2015) (Narrative)

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Date: 7/16/2015 8:58:00 AM
Super 7 on this outstanding write. Congratulations to you both my friends. I love this narrative poem!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 7/16/2015 4:12:00 PM
Hello Robert!! Great hearing from you my dear friend. These fantasy writes are indeed very much fun. Liam and I tend to excel at these when brainstorm the topic we are planning to write on. Glad you liked this write!! And thanks for the "7"!! I hope all is going better on your end. Give my and Ingrid's regards to your wife and family!! Best Always, Gary
Date: 7/6/2015 9:54:00 AM
wow!!!! A beautiful and wonder write, you penned this extremely beautiful. your your words speak eloquent in mind of readers, excellent............A.M.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 7/6/2015 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Afolabi!! Appreciate your read and your gracious comments here. Glad you liked my and Liam's co-write!! Best Always, Gary
Date: 7/5/2015 5:25:00 PM
the eyes just popped straight out of the sockets love this piece gary your pen just dazzled the frog blinding a pleasure doing this with you dear friend wishing you both a blessed day filled with warm smiles
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Gary Bateman
Date: 7/5/2015 5:31:00 PM
Liam Mate!! Looks like our final result here had the desired effect!! Sorry you're eyes popped out of your sockets, but that's the co-effect that one can get when one co-writes fantasy piece with a Class A sentimentalist like me!! I'm quite happy it turned out so well. A pleasure, as always, working with you Mate!! Cheers, Gary
Date: 7/5/2015 2:05:00 PM
- This is a loving, sweet and romantic fairy tale - And I will never be "too old" to be mesmerized :) - Really enjoyable to read my dear friends Gary and Liam .... and I love happy ending :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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liam mcdaid
Date: 7/5/2015 5:27:00 PM
thank you deeply anne lise your so sweet dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful day filled with glowing smiles
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Gary Bateman
Date: 7/5/2015 3:23:00 PM
Anne-Lise, Thanks for your read and your wonderful note. Fairy Tales like this one never grow old. They just become more interesting as each and everyone of us grow older. (Liam may be commenting later . . .) Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary