Raul Moreno Poet Free verse

Mother Nature's Dream

She dreams of burning forests,
Waves of flames cresting the earth.
All what once was...ablaze.

A firestorm of visions,
Haunt her soul from ease.
Nestled in these ashes,
Rests the end time...predictions.

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Charmaine Chircop October 31, 2009 at 2:52 PM Predictions,,the end is near..that feeling.. the flames ablaze..dying ending in ashes.. excellet Raul..Charma

James Fraser October 31, 2009 at 8:12 AM I hope mother natures dreams are not whats happening to her world presently, nicely written Raul >> James

Gert W. Knop October 24, 2009 at 1:31 AM I like your - firestorm of visions - great written lines, Raúl. And thanks for your comments...Gert

Doris Culverhouse October 22, 2009 at 7:50 PM nicley penned, firestorms are scary!

Carrie Richards October 22, 2009 at 7:55 AM Terrific poem, however, I hope her dreams tonight are of a peaceful world, harmony, and hope!! Hmmm....a tough request in such a difficult troubled world!!

Carolyn Devonshire October 22, 2009 at 6:23 AM Much has been written of these "predictions." Man has the power to change their course, but we must learn to deal fairly and lovingly with each other.

James Marshall Goff October 21, 2009 at 5:31 PM who's to say it's not true! well done! Raul, jim