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Mother Nature's Dream

She dreams of burning forests, Waves of flames cresting the earth. All what once was...ablaze. A firestorm of visions, Haunt her soul from ease. Nestled in these ashes, Rests the end time...predictions.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/31/2009 2:52:00 PM
Predictions,,the end is near..that feeling.. the flames ablaze..dying ending in ashes.. excellet Raul..Charma
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Date: 10/31/2009 8:12:00 AM
I hope mother natures dreams are not whats happening to her world presently, nicely written Raul >> James
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Date: 10/24/2009 1:31:00 AM
I like your - firestorm of visions - great written lines, Raúl. And thanks for your comments...Gert
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:50:00 PM
nicley penned, firestorms are scary!
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:55:00 AM
Terrific poem, however, I hope her dreams tonight are of a peaceful world, harmony, and hope!! Hmmm....a tough request in such a difficult troubled world!!
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Date: 10/22/2009 6:23:00 AM
Much has been written of these "predictions." Man has the power to change their course, but we must learn to deal fairly and lovingly with each other.
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Date: 10/21/2009 5:31:00 PM
who's to say it's not true! well done! Raul, jim
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