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A Villanelle
A Villanelle is nineteen lines with an ( aba aba aba aba aba abaa ) rhyming scheme. Repetitive lines are part of the form the first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).

 

Sending light and warmth at the birth of spring seasons are obedient to Her call, Nature's the mother for whom the birds sing. She commands the clouds and the rains they bring ensuring Her forests grow straight and tall, sending light and warmth at the birth of spring. She summons storms, and the lightning they fling, from a raging gale to a gentle squall, Nature's the mother for whom the birds sing. She freezes winter when icicles cling and snowdrifts conceal the colors of fall, sending light and warmth at the birth of spring. She shapes the sun into a golden ring and lights up the moon like a glowing ball, Nature's the mother for whom the birds sing. She's everywhere, controlling everything, morphing misty droplets into a shawl. Sending light and warmth at the birth of spring, Nature's the mother for whom the birds sing. (Villanelle) 5/7/2017

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Date: 5/23/2018 10:04:00 AM
Very interesting presentation, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/23/2018 12:18:00 PM
Thank you very much Line, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 5/12/2017 12:07:00 PM
Very nice words Emile. One can read in these words that you have studied, through experience and care, this most special season. Nice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/12/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thanks Scott, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/9/2017 4:27:00 AM
Emile, This is truly a gorgeous tribute to Our Mother, one that invoked much emotion and memories of the many times I have stood in awe of her grace, beauty and powers. Well done! Elisa Christensen
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/9/2017 9:30:00 AM
Thanks Elisa, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/8/2017 11:45:00 AM
A really beautiful Villanelle Emile. This tribute to Mother Nature extols her powers! Lovely,! 7 ; )
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/8/2017 11:54:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie, your friendly words have touched my heart, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/8/2017 2:54:00 AM
Yet another poetry form that you have treated us readers to with perfection. Thanks for sharing A7++...Maria I love the image.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/8/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Maria, I appreciate your continued support and comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/7/2017 9:36:00 PM
Very beautiful Emile! Can we get mother nature to slow down on the rain a bit! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/8/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/7/2017 9:16:00 PM
Excellent, Emile, your blessed with the gift of writing a7 and fav !
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/9/2017 11:26:00 PM
I hope you don't mind, but I shared this on facebook on the 7th.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/8/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Eve, your friendly words have touched my heart, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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