Mother Nature

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Thin petals shine like rubies on a radiant plain, solar flares are congregated in votive candles. Vowed to gleam, regardless of the morning rain, ambiguity was minimized by sunrise anvils. In the gloom, the mist vanishes, executing a sane. As the roots expand, the sprouts grow in kind, we will apply a dome to secure it from rainfall. We admire them when they finally grow up and bind, perceiving our trees naked, we bear the sprawl, returning to the ancient oak, they are to remind. Oh, Moon, relax as you quietly fade out of sight, an Arc of vivid sapphire hues, an Airy-haven Edenic. The stars vowed to keep the night sky bright, nature, your brushwork is vibrant and scenic. Venus nodded as the moon flickered at her site. Written: October 08, 2022 THREE STANZA POEM IN QUINTAIN (SICILIAN) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/9/2022 2:11:00 AM

You can write poetry in any form. You are a true poet.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/8/2022 3:57:00 PM

Lovely poem with eloquent images, Lasaad. A moving poem, and good entry for the contest. Best wishes my friend. Bill

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/8/2022 11:16:00 AM

The stars vowed to keep the night sky bright, and you Sotto with your amazing poetry keep the light of our hearts open, flaring bright, oh so bright, this is a well penned poem that clings to the soul, a winner in my book of memorable ones :)