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Mother Nature

Such a stunning season, spring fever I adore. Blossoms drifting from trees, daffodils start dancing on a warm zephyr breeze. Such a stunning season, sensational summer. Children play on the sand … then they ask for ice creams which will melt on their hand! Such a stunning season, I love autumnal hues. Leaves of orange and brown carpet the forest floor with a glorious gown. Such a stunning season, a winter wonderland. Icy snowflakes delight … although bitterly cold it’s a beautiful sight! 2. Nature Checked with rhymezone and HMS Form M - Monchielle - New Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 04/11/22

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John Watt

Date: 5/4/2022 8:32:00 PM

Jan, I enjoyed your trip around the sun marking the highlights of each season. All your imagery is brilliant, congrats for your win. Hope you are doing well, my friend. Hugs ~ John

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/2/2022 7:09:00 AM

The four seasons packed into an explosive, creative, majestic poem - Congratulations on a well deserved win - breathtaking Jan. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Silpika Kalita

Date: 4/25/2022 12:44:00 AM

Many congratulations on your deserving win. A great tribute, to mother nature in Monchielle, truly artistic and pictorial

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/21/2022 4:48:00 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations, Jan!

Constance La France

Date: 4/17/2022 3:53:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2022 4:30:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2022 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your "Mother Nature" win. What a fun write with "daffodils dancing" and "ice creams which will melt on their hand" Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/14/2022 8:48:00 PM

Great wonders shown in "Such a stunning season" - Congratulations!

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/13/2022 3:21:00 AM

WoW! Jan, This is a great entry for the content. You captured each season well. I enjoyed this poem a lot. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. PS. I hope all is well with you:-) Alexis

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/12/2022 5:57:00 AM

Jan, I really enjoyed your seasonal Monchielle! My fave being the Ice creams of Summer! Good luck in the contest and Happy Tuesday xxoo

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/12/2022 4:51:00 AM

Winter spring summer and fall, all you gotta do is call, and Jan will be there, yes she will, I dunno I’ve been humming that song, since reading your inspiring melodic poem, all the best for contest, cheers David

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/11/2022 11:04:00 AM

Enjoyed, although a snowy winter is best viewed through a window . . . .Aloha!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/11/2022 8:54:00 AM

Exquisite writing, Jan. You poem highlighting each of the seasons is truly delightful. I see a winner here!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/11/2022 8:09:00 AM

Enjoyed your descriptions of seasons and rhythm of your poem, Jan. Indeed a beautiful sight and a winning poem!

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/11/2022 7:35:00 AM

Good job of covering the seasons in your Monchielle stanzas.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thanks Jenna, I need to think of one for Andrea now, Ive never written this form before|:-) hugs Jan xx