Jan Allison Poet Monchielle Stanza

Mother Nature

Such a stunning season,
spring fever I adore.
Blossoms drifting from trees,
daffodils start dancing
on a warm zephyr breeze.

Such a stunning season,
sensational summer.
Children play on the sand …
then they ask for ice creams
which will melt on their hand!

Such a stunning season,
I love autumnal hues.
Leaves of orange and brown
carpet the forest floor
with a glorious gown.

Such a stunning season,
a winter wonderland.
Icy snowflakes delight …
although bitterly cold
it’s a beautiful sight!

2. Nature

Checked with rhymezone and HMS

Form M - Monchielle - New Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
04/11/22

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John Watt May 4, 2022 at 8:32 PM Jan, I enjoyed your trip around the sun marking the highlights of each season. All your imagery is brilliant, congrats for your win. Hope you are doing well, my friend. Hugs ~ John

Jennifer Proxenos May 2, 2022 at 7:09 AM The four seasons packed into an explosive, creative, majestic poem - Congratulations on a well deserved win - breathtaking Jan. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Silpika Kalita April 25, 2022 at 12:44 AM Many congratulations on your deserving win. A great tribute, to mother nature in Monchielle, truly artistic and pictorial

Kim Rodrigues April 21, 2022 at 4:48 AM Beautiful! Congratulations, Jan!

Constance La France April 17, 2022 at 3:53 PM Jan, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Sara Kendrick April 16, 2022 at 4:30 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith April 15, 2022 at 10:31 AM Congratulations on your "Mother Nature" win. What a fun write with "daffodils dancing" and "ice creams which will melt on their hand" Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Christuraj Alex April 14, 2022 at 8:48 PM Great wonders shown in "Such a stunning season" - Congratulations!

Alexis Y. April 13, 2022 at 3:21 AM WoW! Jan, This is a great entry for the content. You captured each season well. I enjoyed this poem a lot. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. PS. I hope all is well with you:-) Alexis

Mike Gentile April 12, 2022 at 5:57 AM Jan, I really enjoyed your seasonal Monchielle! My fave being the Ice creams of Summer! Good luck in the contest and Happy Tuesday xxoo

David Kavanagh April 12, 2022 at 4:51 AM Winter spring summer and fall, all you gotta do is call, and Jan will be there, yes she will, I dunno I’ve been humming that song, since reading your inspiring melodic poem, all the best for contest, cheers David

Rico Leffanta April 11, 2022 at 11:04 AM Enjoyed, although a snowy winter is best viewed through a window . . . .Aloha!

L Milton Hankins April 11, 2022 at 8:54 AM Exquisite writing, Jan. You poem highlighting each of the seasons is truly delightful. I see a winner here!

Vijay Pandit April 11, 2022 at 8:09 AM Enjoyed your descriptions of seasons and rhythm of your poem, Jan. Indeed a beautiful sight and a winning poem!

Jenna Logan April 11, 2022 at 7:35 AM Good job of covering the seasons in your Monchielle stanzas. Jan Allison April 11, 2022 at 7:57 AM Thanks Jenna, I need to think of one for Andrea now, Ive never written this form before|:-) hugs Jan xx