Get Your Premium Membership

MOTHER NATURE

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like JAN ALLISON.


Sue’s labour lasted for seventeen hours finally hears newborn cries - a family at last! 3/21/19 Writing Challenge 4, March 2019- Kimo- Poetry Contest Sponsored By Dear Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 3/25/2019 2:26:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your win in my contest. There is nothing more sweet than that first baby cry !
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/25/2019 5:02:00 PM
thanks for the inspiration Constance without your contest many brilliant poems would never be written:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/24/2019 1:59:00 PM
So sweet! Congrats. BG
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/24/2019 3:50:00 PM
thanks so much Barbara:-)hugs jan xx
Date: 3/24/2019 8:06:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/24/2019 3:49:00 PM
thanks so much Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/24/2019 1:37:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Jan, kindest thoughts Ann xx have just woken to a glorious sunny day here in Sussex so I hope you wake to one too...
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/24/2019 3:49:00 PM
the last couple of days have been gorgeous spring days Ann:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/23/2019 8:49:00 PM
This is gorgeous, and so is the baby!
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/24/2019 3:48:00 PM
thanks Caren isn't the baby a cuite!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/23/2019 3:13:00 AM
Sweet ...
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/24/2019 3:48:00 PM
thanks Kai:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/23/2019 3:13:00 AM
I am waiting for grandchildren. But I cannot push hard enough ...
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/24/2019 3:47:00 PM
I'm hoping one day before I depart this world to be a grandmother too:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/22/2019 11:39:00 AM
Nothing like the cry of a newborn and by the way the tantrums of a two year old. A mom, whose child had cerebral palsy, was hoping for those. The lovely, lively cries of life! Nice one, dear! Hugs from Georgia USA
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/24/2019 3:47:00 PM
thanks Kim, all we hope is our baby will be born healthy, sadly those wishes don't always come true:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/22/2019 2:01:00 AM
some seem to think simple comments are fake, this is "simply beautiful" bugger the ones who don't get honest comments!
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/22/2019 3:46:00 AM
I can't understand why folk turn off comments then make a show of telling people how they should do it - 'do as i say but not as i do' lol!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/22/2019 12:43:00 AM
Whew! That's a long time but I bet it's love all the way. Hugs and good luck.
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/22/2019 3:44:00 AM
I was in labour for longer but wouldn't have changed a minute!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/21/2019 10:20:00 PM
When women go through labour they deserve a medal, it puts us men to shame. Good luck Jan. Tom.
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/22/2019 3:44:00 AM
It's not called labour for nothing Tom, it's damned hard work but if you get a healthy child at the end its well worth it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/21/2019 7:05:00 PM
My late wife had a terrible time of it, so I have the greatest admiration for those who can provide some comfort. So different from the Reservation where women just squat by a tree and whoosh, out it comes....We are all happy you survived! Aloha! Rico
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/21/2019 7:09:00 PM
Thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/21/2019 3:03:00 PM
Lovely kimo Jan, that first cry is all you want to hear as those 17 hours just disappear! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/21/2019 3:05:00 PM
I totally agree Ann the moment you hold them in your arms the labour is a distant memory:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/21/2019 2:49:00 PM
- Seventeen hours ... will be rewarded with many happy years together, Jan :) - A lovely poem :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
ALLISON Avatar
JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/21/2019 2:50:00 PM
I was in labour even longer but it was worth every minute:-) hugs jan xx