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Mother Mine

I see you breathe, I watch you cry, I hear you laugh, Your my mother, mother mine. I lie, We fight, I break you down, Stubborn but fierce, An heir who's yet to bear your crown. You're the voice in my head, Telling me right from wrong, The never ending conscience, A repetitive song. I see your mournful, You're silent in days I've failed, Your my mother; my heart's in anguish, For your silence has ailed. My actions and choices, equivocal to say, That I'm doing my best to be more than I am, The babe you named and here to stay, I'll love you more with each passing day. I am what I am, A free spirit you bore, The tiny thing you held, I'm growing and still learning evermore. Your my mother, My creator, A woman so strong, My mirrored other, stubborn when we're wrong, I yearn for your words, Your hand to extend and feel your embrace, Never shall I surrender, never will I cease to try, For you're my mother, mother mine.

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Date: 6/25/2023 2:28:00 AM
what a lovely tribute Bethan, so glad you made up - I lost my mum last year and it hit so so so hard. hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2023 10:14:00 AM
Lovely tribute to your Mother Bethan, a big welcome to poetry soup. Tom
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Bethan Williams
Date: 3/7/2023 11:44:00 AM
Thank you kindly. I wrote this for my mum when she and I had a big fight couple years ago, but she always supported my writing, as soon as I wrote this and sent it to her she crumbled and we immediately made up again. My family have always said I should write a book.
Date: 2/21/2023 5:54:00 AM
thanks for the read and welcome to this site
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Date: 2/18/2023 6:18:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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