Mother Love

My personal favourite

She ran; madly she ran, asking for mustard seeds, only some, a little, a handful of mustard seeds to cure her son. She ran; madly she ran from one house to another, where none had ever died, asking for mustard seeds, from a family of immortals. “She is mad; her endeavor is mad; it's as futile as that mother squirrel's act,” onlookers thought; none spoke, but she ran; madly she ran. She started at dawn when dew was glistening, and bubbles were dancing to the tune of kerosene lamps. She ran; madly she ran, passing the dying buds and roses, burnt by the scorching sun, but still she ran; madly she ran. She ran; madly she ran, with no food, with no drink, with disheveled hair, loosened clothes, while tears of blood were pouring from her aching, motherly breasts. She ran; still she ran, madly she ran. “Sister, your run is mad; we are mortals but not immortals,” they said, but she ran; madly she ran. She ran; faster she ran; madly she ran, until the sun died, the life giver and killer died, and till houses and trees wore black veils to mourn for his death, she ran, madly she ran. Suddenly, her tears stopped; she stopped, but with her son — the lifeless flower, still in her arms.
2nd place in the following Premiere Contest (judged on Oct. 18, 2021). Contest: YOUR PERSONAL FAVORITE, NO. 2 Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: L MILTON HANKINS A 1st Place in the following contest (judged on May 23, 20210 Originally posted on Jan. 16, 2017 Most Original Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Juliet Ligon *Honourable Mention* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 25, 2020) April 9, 2018 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (32)any form any theme Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand *7th Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 22, 2020) April 9, 2018 old poems, FREE VERSE (003) Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A ~9th Place~ Premiere Contest: Non-Romantic Love Sponsor: Emile Pinet Judged: 04/11/2018 April 9, 2018
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Alex Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 11:09 PM
Beautiful writing on Mother and her incomparable love. Congratulations!
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Thank you so much, Alex, for this encouraging comment and the congrats!!
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 10:07 AM
So good to see this on the winners list, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 3:27 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for this lovely comment, and the congrats!!
Radice Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 6:47 AM
A very poignant poem Newton and a worthy winner in Milt's contest. Cheers - Gary
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 6:08 PM
Thank you so much, Gary, for this amazingly encouraging comment!!
Hankins Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:52 PM
Newton, my heartiest CONGRATULATIONS for your very high placement in my contest. I loved your poem, and it certainly earned its place!
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:40 PM
Thank you so much, Milton, for the great comment, very high placement in your contest and the congratulations!!
Ashley Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Dear Newton, it is my pleasure to return once more with my heartfelt congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Your exquisite poem moves me more deeply with every read. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:39 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for this amazingly great comment and your kind revisits.
Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Dear Newton, I return with my heartiest congratulations, it is a pleasure to read this potent heartbreaking poem once again. I'm so glad this poignant piece was placed high on the winner's list, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:37 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for this great comment!!
Ligon Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 5:58 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Newton! With your repeated lines I can sense the urgency. Touching story.
Ranaweera  Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 6:46 PM
Thank yo so much, Juliet, for the placement, comment and the congratulations!!
Ashley Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 7:10 PM
Newton, your poem is gripping and intense with the frantic emotions and actions of a mother in the throes of sorrow and anguish. My heart ached and raced with hers. Your poignant pen is beautiful. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for your impressively beautiful comment and the great complement!!
Balasubramanian Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 11:12 AM
I remember reading this story cannot recollect where. Does it come under tales of Gautam Buddha. Nicely written.A well deserved win. Glad you commented on my poem. I checked out and found many great writes.enjoyed reading your poems. Take care. Warm regards Rama
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 1:08 PM
Thank you so much, Rama, for your kind visit and for this immensely great comment!!
Donnelly Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Oh, WOW! The true essence of a Mother's desperation when her child's life is in jeopardy. So well portrayed throughout your poem, Newton. Congrats on your win! :) ~ Artsie
Ranaweera  Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 8:52 PM
Hi Artsie, Thank you so much for your great comment. It's a great, great encouragement. Thanks again.
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:32 AM
What a very stirring poem, Newton. You really make your reader feel the languish and panic. Beautifully executed poem. And a most deserving win for you. Congrats!
Ranaweera  Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:53 AM
Hi Line Gauthier, Thank you so much for this great comment. All mothers, including the one in this narrative, deserve this praise, too.
Neumann Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 2:20 AM
Congratulations. For me personally this poem is the winner of the competition. but poetry is not a race, but your story is a race against time, I suppose and sometimes times runs out...Beautifully pennend and touching. The description of perceived madness...Many wishes, Kai
Ranaweera  Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 9:46 AM
Thank you so much, Kai. Your comment is a great prize, indeed.
Gentry Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Congratulations on your win with this intense, powerful poem. The repeating line strengthens more each time, giving me a frantic feeling. A heartbreaking write well done.
Ranaweera  Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Thanks, Susan. Your comment is a great honour for me, indeed. All praise should be extended to mothers' love and sacrifices. Thanks again.
Roper Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Congratulations on excellent win, Newton..Hugs Eve ~`*
Ranaweera  Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. It's a great honour to have great comments from great family members of 'Poetry Soup'. Thanks again.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 4:06 PM
You convey the depth of frantic sorrow in this magnificent piece Newton! I am so happy to see this on the short winner's list. Congratulations! : )
Ranaweera  Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Hi Connie, Receiving very positive comments is a greater win than winning hundred contests. Thank you so much for your great comment.
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 3:13 PM
such a moving poem Newton, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ranaweera  Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Thank you so much, Jan Allision. It’s a great honour.
Pinet Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations Newton, your poem earned a place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Ranaweera  Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Hi Emile Pinet, Thank you so much for selecting my poem, too, as one among the ten selected poems in the context. It’s a great honour, indeed. Thanks again.
Herlihy Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Very strong, very intense, very moving. A fine poem indeed. JH5r4
Ranaweera  Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Thank you so much for your GREAT comment.
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