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Mother Fly

I, a sexy fly on my teenager’s wall Eager to hear what she'd say when he'd call For times were bad And I was scared That she'd try to run away to Nepal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/29/2011 5:41:00 PM
Mother Fly. Great title. So you worry about your kids, huh? I guess I never worried ENOUGH! But mine turned out great nonetheless. Good luck in the contest with this cute idea. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 5:02:00 AM
:) this is a funny write tahera...well done
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:50:00 AM
Ha-Ha! You have me laughing, Tahera. This is a very funny entry for the fly on the wall contest. I'm sure Michael will enjoy it as much as I did. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:51:00 PM
Can of like to go there myself someday! Thank you for sharing! Steve
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:25:00 PM
LOl ,, Tahera,, good luck if its for Michael's..contest.. ;-),..p.d.
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