Mother Fly

I, a sexy fly on my teenager’s wall
Eager to hear what she'd say when he'd call
For times were bad
And I was scared
That she'd try to run away to Nepal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 5:41 PM
Mother Fly. Great title. So you worry about your kids, huh? I guess I never worried ENOUGH! But mine turned out great nonetheless. Good luck in the contest with this cute idea. LUv, Andrea
Gibbs Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 5:02 AM
:) this is a funny write tahera...well done
Devonshire Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Ha-Ha! You have me laughing, Tahera. This is a very funny entry for the fly on the wall contest. I'm sure Michael will enjoy it as much as I did. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
Henderson Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 8:51 PM
Can of like to go there myself someday! Thank you for sharing! Steve
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January 23, 2011 at 8:25 PM
LOl ,, Tahera,, good luck if its for Michael's..contest.. ;-),..p.d.
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