Mother and Me

I was deprived of a father at the early age of thirteen.                                                                                                 Then, there were mom, grandma, eleven siblings, and me.

Based on her accomplishments with my siblings and me,                                                                                        and observing first hand how she sacrificed her life for us,

mother is without a doubt at the very top of my hero list.                                                                                                She never remarried, but still, we grew strong and thrived.

Yes, I missed the guidance and wisdom of a loving father,                                                                                       but she mothered gently without ever trying to father me.

I remember being in a room alone tearing over our dad                                                                                                     who had died before he reached sixty, but I moved on.

Very little stalling and never stuck; thanks to our mom.                                                                                                    She did not shove, or nag; but she pruned me tenderly

with love, and I blossomed manly by her green thumb.                                                                                                    She observed the direction of my bent and nurtured

me with encouragement, making me proud to be her son.                                                                                             I was the fourth of 12 children, eleven of whom were minors

when daddy passed on, and mother was only thirty-five.                                                                                                   At the time of his passing, the oldest was seventeen, and                                                                                  

the youngest was nine months. Though our numbers were                                                                                      many and mixed, I felt no shortest of love from mother.

She never attempted to change, detour, or repackage me.                                                                                                By so doing, we developed a trusting mother-son relationship.

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Date: 5/16/2020 1:23:00 AM
Excellent homage to a wonder mother who did not have an easy go of it, but did an exceptional job. Your love and respect for her is so evident in these radiant words. Congrats on your win! ~ John
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Date: 5/15/2020 4:37:00 PM
Curtis, How fortunate you are to have such an angel of a mother to nurture you into the sensitive talented poet that you are! I loved this expressive poem so filled with gratitude for your mother’s love. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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