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Written 05/October 2019

 

 

 

Mother and Child

I have heard 
From the very wise,
That In the smile of a child,
You can see the vision of divinity.
In the innocence of those eyes,
Are the essence of serenity.
In their loving cuddles,
You feel God’s embrace....
So I ask
Should I pray to my Lord
Or play with my child?

And they say-
The sound of Child’s laughter
Can bring joys of the morning birds!
Their toddling little feet  echo the rhythm of the herds!
So I ask 
Should I seek God in his creation
Or in the joys of my child?

Later in bed, at slumber’s door
I wrestled with doubts, no more!
the soft gentle breathing next to me,
Had calmness and peace 
Of the deep blue sea.
A quiet prayer, I whispered, to the Lord,
And  slept,
My child  in my arms,
feeling God close to me.

05/10/2019
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Balasubramanian Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 2:41 AM
Beautiful poem ... I can relate to this as a mother. Every day I would put my hands over my son and put him to sleep. One day when he was very small he put his hands over me and those soft featherlite hands touching me made me experience divine bliss ... you are right! a child is God
Ashley Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 7:41 PM
Indeed, I feel your very words! Krish, this rich, warm, contemplative poem makes my heart sing for its tender and touching muse that moves my memories and emotions in such a wondrous way. I feel the beauty of your artistry to the center of my being. A fav! Such a superb poetic offering! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Thank you Susan for your kind words and for visiting my page. Delighted get such positive review from a wonderful poet like yourself. Honoured!
Callus Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Well done, Krish...one of the best poems I've read lately, and the ending is beautiful and touching. ~ Best regards // paul
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Paul. I am very pleased to know you rate it highly. You are a brilliant poet and the brevity you bring to your poems is just wonderful!
One Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 2:53 PM
A beautiful poem...children are a sweet creation..
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 2:56 PM
Thank you!
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