Mother

As I sit I contemplate the hours I spend alone,
Never complaining, never crying.
You used to love me ,want me, need me,
Until it happened.
Now I sit and contemplate the hours I spend alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Lola. Love Carol
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December 2, 2012 at 6:38 PM
Lola.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 5:33 PM
I really like this one. Congrats on your HM with it.
Barron Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 6:33 PM
Thanks very much. Lola.
Guzzi Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 3:09 PM
Thanks so much for this fine entry..it made me miss my Mom! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Barron Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 6:32 PM
Thanks for welcoming me to PoetrySoup and inviting me to enter your contest. Also thanks for my HM. I am enjoying writing poetry and I am very pleased I found PoetrySoup. Lola.
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December 1, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Big congratulations on your HM Lola xx
Barron Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 6:34 PM
Thank you. Lola.
Roberts Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 12:25 AM
Congrats. Lola ......Seren
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November 30, 2012 at 5:29 PM
Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Barron Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 6:43 PM
Thank you very much. Lola.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 4:00 PM
The sadness is obvious in this write Lola. Welcome to the soup you have made a wonderful start xx
Guzzi Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 2:03 PM
This write would be a good contest entry for my % line contest, please do enter. Light & Love
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