Moth and Flame

You the animated pyre
forging a lustful fire
I flee from the darkness
that freezes my life
embracing this moment of death desire...

I am endlessly drawn
to you like a moth to a flame
you the object of my spiraling flight
your bright sun pulls me closer
I burn to speak your name...

Adrift in small sea of light
see dark path to your remains
this funereal night sum of all fears
kindles as you ship like unfurl your mane
flickering flaring as I draw near...

Mesmerized by such blazing beauty
in path of sacrifice I am caught
powerless to resist calescent sexuality
I immolate in the very fire that is sought
burning in your flame with futile delight...

Mi amor the beacon to my demise
with doom the most certain end
gliding towards your banshee cries
my spirit will never turn craven
intoxicated with love into your flame I descend...
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/11/2014 1:13:00 PM
WOW!!! Ken-"WOW!!! I have no word, tho' I marvel at the beauty and passion of this piece! Wonderful Write, my dear friend Ken!!!//Sinclair
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Ken Carroll
Date: 2/11/2014 1:15:00 PM
Thanks Robert..Much appreciated!
Date: 1/15/2014 4:40:00 PM
Wow! Love and desire can lead us to our demise, sometimes, and you expressed that so well here. I love the creative metaphors of a moth mesmerized by the flame. This is a beautiful write, Ken!...Thank you very much for the kind comments.
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Date: 1/15/2014 5:45:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Kelly.. Ken
Date: 1/14/2014 5:01:00 PM
Ken Such a beautiful, passionate, romantic, loving, and sweet write. I could feel the devotion and dedication to this special person in every line. Nicely done. Thanks for the great comment on my Karma poem.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 1/14/2014 5:56:00 PM
Thank you Robin for visiting..It is always a pleasure to read your verse as well.. Ken
Date: 1/14/2014 11:16:00 AM
i like the passion and the intimate sense of ' flaming' that love brings... beautifully composed!.. huggs
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Date: 1/14/2014 12:34:00 PM
Thank you for the kindest of comments Nette.. Ken
Date: 1/14/2014 7:41:00 AM
- A "burning" love so deep in your heart - irresistible and beautiful Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:04:00 AM
Thank you Anne! Ken
Date: 1/13/2014 3:03:00 PM
Great metaphorical work..I enjoyed reading your passionate intoxicated lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 1/13/2014 3:05:00 PM
thank you kindly Sara! Ken
Date: 1/13/2014 2:42:00 PM
This one Rocks Ken!
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:44:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Richard and the wonderful compliment.. Ken
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