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August- 8- 2025

1402 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Brian Strand

\ / U OoOoOoOoO II OoOoOoOoO i’m a II goofy moth % %%%% II %%%%% foolishly drawn II to your flame oO- to be burnt II in fire -Oo OooO II OooO OoOoOoO II OoOoOo U I’m a goofy moth foolishly drawn to your flame~ to be burnt in fire

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Zyrool Gifford

Date: 8/8/2025 9:02:00 AM

Hello Valsa, a beautiful Haiku, loved your artwork. Good luck with the contest, my friend.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/8/2025 3:57:00 AM

Wonderful shape that looks like a real moth. Your haiku portrays perfectly how the moth is drawn to the flame. Good luck with the contest.