Moth

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Image result for picture of a brown moth of a truck's windshield His other ride is a seahawk.

brown moth of the night clings to slippery windshield.... 45 wipe out

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Warren Doll

Date: 10/19/2018 10:08:00 PM

Powerful imagery and unique themed haiku, Sara. Well done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/22/2018 1:51:00 PM

Warren, Thanks for your engaging comments on my work. I appreciate you stopping by. Sara

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/12/2018 11:08:00 AM

Lovely work, captures the sad fate of insects at night when traveling.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/27/2018 4:08:00 PM

Ooh, that must've hit him hard!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2018 4:58:00 PM

M.L., I guess like a ton of bricks. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2018 6:08:00 PM

oh my, riding on a windsheild. Clever.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2018 7:05:00 AM

Andrea, Beats having to fly into town on its own little wings. LOL.. When we got to 45 it blew off. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2018 10:25:00 AM

Wonderful imagery..you painted the scene well, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2018 7:04:00 AM

Vijay, Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. I am glad you enjoyed my painting with words. Sara