Most Beautiful Christmas Poem

(Thank God, when I posted my poem a second time , I could enter it in the contest. But I am retaining my old post as I have many comments on it . I thank all my poet friends who helped me with suggestions, especially Mystic Rose Rose. My soupmail is non functional most of the time)


The naked hills are clad in snow
Blurring the houses that line up in a row
The wind that blows is icy chill
Freezing cold is the water of the rill
Trees, stand stripped and bare
But so much gaiety is in the air

Lightings from all houses shine
Sending out a radiance divine
Christmas trees stand finely decorated
Cribs are colourfully illuminated
The day has come when Christ was born
In our midst as the greatest boon

He came not in glory arrayed
But in a poor man’s rags clad
Took birth not in a palace of gold
But in a deserted manger of old
Poor shepherds were the sole witness
They beheld his radiant face in stillness 

The whole world is under his magic sway
As love for all is his wondrous way 
Jesus came down from Heaven on Earth
To offer the world its true mirth
To dole out the priceless treasure of peace
To see all bitterness and enmity cease 

Merry ditties shall echo from every street
And children will sing Christmas carols sweet 
From the angelic band will rise the refrain
“Peace on Earth and goodwill to all men”

Nov.20. 2022

~ Placed Eighth~

Most Beautiful Christmas Poem Contest
Sponsor – Mystic Rose Rose
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Gasun Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win my dearest friend, Valsa. Enjoying and loving immensely again this magnifiscent poem of yours. Thanks a lot again. Congratulations! Hugs.
George Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 3:27 AM
Thank you so much Len for your second visit to congratulate me. Love and blessings my friend.
Kauffman Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 10:10 AM
Dearest Valsa, once again you spin enchanting magic with your words and images- "naked hills are clad in snow," "to offer the world its true mirth," "to dole out the priceless treasure of peace." All of this wonderfulness comes straight from your poetic heart that hears heavenly inspiration. I feel so blessed to have the many opportunities to read the richness of thought and thoughtful lines of each of your poems. Truly talented dear poetess. Blessed am I to be called friend! Blessings!
George Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 3:24 AM
I feel so small before the wonderful images you loom in the tapestry of your poems. But your words always make me feel that my poems are great ! You not only never let anyone down, but try your best to enhance their sense of personal worth. Thank you so much sweet friend !
Sands Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations for your win. I love that last stanza too :)
George Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 3:18 AM
Heidi, so much gratitude to you friend
Wolf Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 6:45 PM
Enchanting verse here, Valsa. Wishing you and your Muse a wonderful holiday! ~ Gershon
George Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 3:18 AM
Thanks a lot dear Gershon
Romios Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 2:01 PM
You have my vote on such stunning verses. It’s so magically positive…. Thank you, Valsa.. God’s blessings be yours! Pangie
George Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 8:19 PM
I feel so delighted by your uplifting comment. Thanks a lot dear Panagiota !
DiMino Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 6:44 PM
"Jesus came down from Heaven on Earth To offer the world its true mirth To dole out the priceless treasure of peace To see all bitterness and enmity cease" Great Christmas poem! Best of luck in contest.
George Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Glad you liked my Christmas poem. Thanks a lot dear friend ....
Poet Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Dear Valsa, the most mesmerizing and heartwarming beauty that the holiday season has to offer. I am happy to hear that everything went well for you.
George Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 8:17 PM
I know you are my well wisher ! Thank you so much dear poet friend
Buhagiar Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 8:17 AM
To achieve such bliss is important.
George Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 8:15 PM
Christmas is a time of bliss !
Pandit Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Glad everything worked out for you, Valsa. Best to you.
George Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 8:15 PM
So glad Vijay. I was wondering if the same problem would occur for my other poems too ....
Gasun Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 5:55 AM
The most enchanting beauty of Christmas season that warmth my heart. I love your Christmas poem a lot. Going to my fave. God bless you my dear friend for sharing and best wishes in the contest. Hugs
George Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 8:13 PM
Thanks a lot Len. Feel honored that you have made it your fave. Stay blessed !
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 11:04 PM
Oh Valsa, incredibly beautiful. So reverent, and in your beautiful poetry form, so incredibly perfect! <3 :) Love this so much!
George Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 3:18 AM
Hi sweet friend BJ, I revere your appreciation. The same reverence I feel as I read your poems. This appreciation is mutual. Thanks a lot friend.
Boles Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 8:19 PM
You can turn a bare branch into a radiant, shimmering Christmas tree, simply with the magical phrases and words you possess. This is a scenery filled with pure joy Valsa!...ab
George Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 3:13 AM
Anselmo, I feel greatly delighted by your comment. You have made my day. I can never write the crisp and concise poems you often write.....
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November 20, 2022 at 6:51 PM
Most beautiful Christmas poem, Dear Valsa. Enchanting, alluring, charming lines..the divine celebration is portrayed in grandeur. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
George Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 3:15 AM
Thank you so much Mala ffor your very uplifting comment !
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