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Mossy Tunnel ~haiku

Dark mossy tunnel Babbling brook streams under Moist air surrounds dew

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/13/2009 11:20:00 AM

I can really feel this! jim

Brian Strand

Date: 4/5/2009 12:55:00 AM

Cool work here Jane.Nic one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/2/2009 1:33:00 PM

i can picture the scene and the coolness of the stream. john

Arany P.

Date: 3/26/2009 10:36:00 PM

the image is so darkening! yet the haiku is just brilliantly put together! lovely write! ~ Arany

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 3/26/2009 5:30:00 PM

this a indeed a beauty...nicely done!..Maryam*

Date: 3/26/2009 5:21:00 PM

Good use of imagery! Love the opening line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/26/2009 4:09:00 PM

It is like I am there. I would be on the look out for strange creatures. Love the feel of this atmosphere. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/26/2009 3:04:00 PM

An illustrated beauty...Raul

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/26/2009 12:44:00 PM

compact and perfectly formed

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2009 12:31:00 PM

A well-painted image, Jane!