Mosquitoes

I think that I shall always see
mosquitoes coming after me.

These pests against my skin do press,
then bite and make a fast egress.

I lift my eyes to God all day
and plead with Him, "Take them away!"

Strong sprays in summer I must wear
most places except eyes and hair.

Upon my skin itch cream I rub.
I have to buy it by the tub.

I try to make them leave me be,
but only God can make them flee.


patterned after Joyce Kilmer's "Trees"

January 13, 2022
entered in Angela Tune's Insect Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Callus Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 12:53 PM
'Tis an entertaining set of couplets, Janice...I enjoyed, but can't say the same for the mosquitoes! // paul
Canerdy Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Thanks so much, Paul. We grow 'em big here in Mississippi--big and hungry! Janice
Scars Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Janice, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Canerdy Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Thank YOU so much, Luloo. Janice
Laurie Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 1:17 AM
G'day Janice ... that buzzing noise at night is really annoying. Most can relate to your poem Janice - Lindsay
Canerdy Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Thanks, Lindsay. I have seen a Mississippi souvenir t-shirt that features a gigantic mosquito and the words "Please send more tourists. The last ones were delicious"! Janice
Hoffman Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 7:41 PM
I can relate, they like my blood too the little vampires!! My sons and I have been to that forest that is named after Joyce Kilmer with some of the big oaks btw…nice wooded area.
Canerdy Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:27 PM
I learned something new--a forest named after Kilmer. Interesting! Thanks for your comment, Cheryl. Janice
Stebbings Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Real problem for a lot of people. Well written, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Thanks, Barry! The little devils LOVE me! Janice
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace