Mosquitoes

I think that I shall always see
mosquitoes coming after me.

These pests against my skin do press,
then bite and make a fast egress.

I lift my eyes to God all day
and plead with Him, "Take them away!"

Strong sprays in summer I must wear
most places except eyes and hair.

Upon my skin itch cream I rub.
I have to buy it by the tub.

I try to make them leave me be,
but only God can make them flee.


patterned after Joyce Kilmer's "Trees"

January 13, 2022
entered in Angela Tune's Insect Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 5/17/2016 12:53:00 PM
'Tis an entertaining set of couplets, Janice...I enjoyed, but can't say the same for the mosquitoes! // paul
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/17/2016 1:51:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paul. We grow 'em big here in Mississippi--big and hungry! Janice
Date: 5/13/2016 11:01:00 AM
Janice, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/13/2016 4:24:00 PM
Thank YOU so much, Luloo. Janice
Date: 5/12/2016 1:17:00 AM
G'day Janice ... that buzzing noise at night is really annoying. Most can relate to your poem Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/12/2016 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, Lindsay. I have seen a Mississippi souvenir t-shirt that features a gigantic mosquito and the words "Please send more tourists. The last ones were delicious"! Janice
Date: 5/11/2016 7:41:00 PM
I can relate, they like my blood too the little vampires!! My sons and I have been to that forest that is named after Joyce Kilmer with some of the big oaks btw…nice wooded area.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/11/2016 11:27:00 PM
I learned something new--a forest named after Kilmer. Interesting! Thanks for your comment, Cheryl. Janice
Date: 5/11/2016 12:58:00 PM
Real problem for a lot of people. Well written, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/11/2016 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, Barry! The little devils LOVE me! Janice
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