Mosaic Muse

rainbow painted soul green esteem spirit of gold bold soulful halo

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/18/2023 3:05:00 PM

I liked this Haiku. especially 'bold soulful halo'--a perfect description of how I envision a muse. Well done, enjoy your evening, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 10/18/2023 3:48:00 PM

A kind souper told me it isn't a haiku. So I will change the catagory. Glad you like it Sara.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/10/2023 9:43:00 PM

I like the title, Karen. My favorite line is "rainbow painted soul". Hugs, Bill

Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 10:35:00 PM

I had fun with this one Bill. Glad you like it. Thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/10/2023 8:59:00 AM

'll never emulate your haikus. So full of imagery and deep thoughts. Blessings.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 9:11:00 AM

You have your own style and surpass me within effortlessly. I have humbly been able to be a firefly of words of sorts. But your vocabulary skills alone leave me in the dust. Still it's not a competition. We just are poets who love to write. Agreed? Hugs Blessings and thanks.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/9/2023 11:23:00 PM

I really love that title 'mosaic muse' really intrigued me and also this haiku is profound with unique wordplay "rainbow painted soul" Wow! "Green esteemed", " Spirit of gold" The use of colours here is so fascinating! Enjoyed reading this :)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/9/2023 11:29:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comment Hiya!