Mortar Or Mortel

Ring a ding the ice cream truck is pealing
the monotone of a rut day to trap the rat

no amount of cheese will make me budge
the beauty of a flight to orbit the universe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 30, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Catherine, ha great flow. easy to be mislead... enjoyed. LINDA
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March 26, 2016 at 3:27 PM
The meaning behind the poem eludes me. However, I find it strangely compelling! My best regards, Catherine. :) john P.s A seven.
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March 26, 2016 at 3:34 PM
we are mortal and the Pyraminds wont make a difference
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