Morris Fell Hard For Doris

A brontosaurus by name of Morris
Fell hard for Doris, a stegosaurus
  His tush landed right on her
  Sliced open by her armor
Lover Boy Morris had quite a saurus
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Culverhouse Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 4:42 AM
i got a chuckle
Wolf Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Doris, I'm just relieved that you are not 'saurus' at me for this one! Smiles, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 8:20 PM
I guess he DID have a sore "us"
Wolf Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Morris couldn't sit down for a week or two.
Laurie Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 3:49 PM
Hello Gershon … a great play on words and fitted perfectly - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Right up Morris' alley-oops! lol. Thanks, Lindsay.
Fowler Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 8:14 AM
Laughed out loud at the end (pun intended) gw. Terrific write! Linda
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 2:42 PM
Unhappy landings for poor Morris! Laughter and Light, Gershon
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 3:12 PM
ha ha ha that final line is a cracker lol:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:09 PM
Only nuanced minds like ours, Jan, can appreciate sophisticated poetry like this! lol. Thanks for the fun, Gershon
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