Morris Fell Hard For Doris

A brontosaurus by name of Morris
Fell hard for Doris, a stegosaurus
  His tush landed right on her
  Sliced open by her armor
Lover Boy Morris had quite a saurus

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/29/2021 4:42:00 AM
i got a chuckle
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/29/2021 8:00:00 PM
Doris, I'm just relieved that you are not 'saurus' at me for this one! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 10/13/2020 8:20:00 PM
I guess he DID have a sore "us"
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/14/2020 2:38:00 PM
Morris couldn't sit down for a week or two.
Date: 10/7/2020 3:49:00 PM
Hello Gershon … a great play on words and fitted perfectly - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/7/2020 5:31:00 PM
Right up Morris' alley-oops! lol. Thanks, Lindsay.
Date: 10/7/2020 8:14:00 AM
Laughed out loud at the end (pun intended) gw. Terrific write! Linda
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/7/2020 2:42:00 PM
Unhappy landings for poor Morris! Laughter and Light, Gershon
Date: 10/6/2020 3:12:00 PM
ha ha ha that final line is a cracker lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2020 5:09:00 PM
Only nuanced minds like ours, Jan, can appreciate sophisticated poetry like this! lol. Thanks for the fun, Gershon
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