Lin Lane Poet Verse

Morning's Song

Across great plains, in rich soil valleys,
beneath beautiful pastel painted skies,
sunflowers dance like amber cobras.
On graceful stems they sway to refrains
of morning's song, a rhapsody on the wind.


12/4/2022
Bitesize Poem No56 Poetry 
A Line Gauthier sponsored contest

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FJ Thomas January 8, 2023 at 11:49 AM The last line ends this so beautifully, so peacefully. Simply lovely Lin Lin Lane January 31, 2023 at 1:48 AM Thanks so much, Flo.

Karen Jones December 14, 2022 at 2:39 AM Interesting and vivid imagery. What a unique write. Good luck in the contest and happy holidays. Lin Lane December 16, 2022 at 5:06 AM Thanks very much, Karen.

Gary Radice December 12, 2022 at 1:36 AM Sunflowers symbolise so many things: strength,happiness,admiration and loyalty to name just a few. I can see this poem painted and framed in my mind as I type. Nice work Lin. Cheers - Gary Lin Lane December 12, 2022 at 8:08 PM What fantastic comments. Thanks so much Gary.

Anselmo Boles December 4, 2022 at 8:50 PM Spontaneous movements of nature's jewels, like a choreographed love dance! Spiritual sustenance...ab Lin Lane December 8, 2022 at 11:07 AM Indeed, they seem to be. Thank you, Anselmo.

Catie Lindsey December 4, 2022 at 7:34 AM Very lovely. Your imagery is excellent, I can still see them swaying. Lin Lane December 8, 2022 at 11:07 AM Thank you for such nice comments, Catie.

Joanna Daniel December 4, 2022 at 7:32 AM A nice rhapsody from your pen, Lin:) Lin Lane December 8, 2022 at 11:06 AM Thank you so much, Jo.