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Morning's Song

Across great plains, in rich soil valleys, beneath beautiful pastel painted skies, sunflowers dance like amber cobras. On graceful stems they sway to refrains of morning's song, a rhapsody on the wind. 12/4/2022 Bitesize Poem No56 Poetry A Line Gauthier sponsored contest

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Date: 1/8/2023 11:49:00 AM
The last line ends this so beautifully, so peacefully. Simply lovely Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2023 1:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Flo.
Date: 12/14/2022 2:39:00 AM
Interesting and vivid imagery. What a unique write. Good luck in the contest and happy holidays.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/16/2022 5:06:00 AM
Thanks very much, Karen.
Date: 12/12/2022 1:36:00 AM
Sunflowers symbolise so many things: strength,happiness,admiration and loyalty to name just a few. I can see this poem painted and framed in my mind as I type. Nice work Lin. Cheers - Gary
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/12/2022 8:08:00 PM
What fantastic comments. Thanks so much Gary.
Date: 12/4/2022 8:50:00 PM
Spontaneous movements of nature's jewels, like a choreographed love dance! Spiritual sustenance...ab
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2022 11:07:00 AM
Indeed, they seem to be. Thank you, Anselmo.
Date: 12/4/2022 7:34:00 AM
Very lovely. Your imagery is excellent, I can still see them swaying.
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Date: 12/8/2022 11:07:00 AM
Thank you for such nice comments, Catie.
Date: 12/4/2022 7:32:00 AM
A nice rhapsody from your pen, Lin:)
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2022 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo.

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